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When we were perfect

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作者: Amaimsz

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°Amy Moretti:
A stubborn, feisty but kind-hearted girl who works as a criminal lawyer for NIO. She thinks her life is perfect with a loving partner, family, and friends but what she doesn't know is life has its meaning of perfection.

°Daniel Saritas:
Young and sinfully handsome self-made billionaire known as ruthless in the business world. He is a person with a troubled past but hides his emotions to such an extent that people call him ice king, he also happens to be the best friend of Amy Moretti and is secretly in love with her but keeps it one-sided for the sake of of of her happiness.

A certain change of events which includes the death of a loved one and revenge for death leads to both of them getting married.
Join their journey of hatred, secrets, pain, happiness, and promises.
It's a slow burn romance.

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    Amaimsz

    Do give my work a chance,you won't be disappointed. It's different from other stories with the male lead being the victim of destiny's cruel games. Warning:You are in for an emotional roller coaster filled with drama,struggle for love and change of personalities.

    2yr
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    Aleesha_Sakhawat

    This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.

    2yr
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    Ayesha_Nadeem_7542

    I am really looking forward. Story is saddening but appealing. Especially Daniel what a wonderful person he is shown to be. I hope he gets happiness,he is really heartbroken.🥲

    2yr
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    Aamna_Sajid

    Wow, never knew you could write it like this. I mean I am genuinely impressed sister. The character development is smooth and I am already in love with Silas. He is literally like me. I hope you put the same effort in remaining novel as you did in the start. Best of luck.♥♥♥

    2yr
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    FieldRead

    I enjoyed the story very much. The grammar and lack of editing sometimes was very annoying, but the story was worth it to me.

    1yr
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    Nikolas_Ahlers

    I liked reading this book. Great characters and thought out plot. Only thing I didn’ like was the one month hiatus because I was really Into the book but overall it was good. Keep up the good work.

    2yr
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    Lee_Sparrow

    👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

    2yr
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    reliable_foodpoint

    I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.😻😻😻

    2yr
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    The_Amna_World

    Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time 😌. Especially, Daniel, he is shown as serious and broken at the same time. If you add more scenes about his last maybe it will give more inside about what made him like this. Anyhow, the story is amazing looking forward to reading more about it.

    2yr
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    predominantt

    Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

    3yr
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    Ayesha_5572

    What a ride this novel has been. Emotional,heart tickling and beautiful. Keep up the good work author, your writing truly amazes me. Best of luck for future work.❤❤❤

    1yr
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    Lillian_Morgan_8902

    I think I will only leave hearts here for this amazing work. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🏵🏵🏵🏵🏵🌸🌸🌸🌸⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

    2yr
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    Penelope_Octave

    I think the pace needs to be fastened a bit but the whole story and plot are fantastic. I love Daniel a lot. He is truly a gold-hearted person.💌💌💌💌💌💌 Sending love.

    2yr
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    Salaar_Adil

    Woah! What a story. I loved your work and wish you all the best in your writing. Keep updating.💕💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 Looking forward.

    2yr
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    Landon_Coling

    Amazing work, the poetry in the start really gives vibes. keep it up, the characters and whole cast is amazing,can't wait for the end. Xoxo

    2yr
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    Zaim_Orsini

    I think you should work more on background skills but overall the plotline is great and I am looking forward to reading it. I already love Daniel and Silas. Good luck with your work.💕💕💕

    2yr
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    Murad_Ozan

    Hey! I just started reading your novel and it's amazing. Usually, stories in which the male lead is depressed are very few. Also, character design is good. Keep it up.💜💜

    2yr
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    Amelia_Orsini

    Wow, I am looking forward to reading your work. I usually don't read contemporary romance novels but it's different and appealing. I hope you continue to work on it. Lots of love ❤️ 🥀🥀

    2yr
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