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I woke up in the world of Naruto with the King of Normal Attacks System, unlocking the Zaraki Kenpachi template right from the start.
Kenpachi, Hawk Eyes, White Hollow...
As each template fused together, the ninja world gave birth to a madman who lived only for the swing of his blade.
“Without a doubt, he could cut straight through my Perfect Susanoo.”
Madara Uchiha’s face hardened.
“In truth, it was the sword in his hand that split the moon.”
Toneri Ōtsutsuki gave a bitter smile and shook his head.
“Come then. Let the slaughter begin.”
And as the roaring fiend tore into the world of men, cries of anguish echoed. The wails of the damned became the true melody of this world.
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The story really fails to get Kenpachi's character. He isn't some might guy/lee type of character- practicing slices in training 10,000 times. He was a mutt, a hoodlum fighting constantly and surviving. Someone with tons of battlelust. And the powers aside, it doesn't get the personality type right either. The main character is far more enterested in acting like an edgelord than actually being obsessed with battle. He's not obsessed with it.
I have a mixed feelings about this story. I like, that mc is swordman with Kenpachi (from Bleach) template, but it also feels kind of bland overall. We don't get specified on what mc unlocks, he's just described as becoming stronger and stronger. I really can't take mc seriously. He's 5/6 years old and he drinks strong Chinese alcohol like a juice. Nobody is trying to stop him from doing that and treat him like an adult when it comes to it. We didn't get to know, how he gets money to constantly drink alcohol. Mc acts like emo and arrogant person. He's painfully written, especially when he's constantly saying, that he wants to prevent Anko from her getting Orochimaru's cursed seal, without explaining on how exactly he's going to do that, without trying to even warn Anko about him.
Hey everyone! This is a really interesting Naruto fanfic that I wanted to read, so I decided to translate it. The updates for this one will be less frequent than my other projects — about three chapters every two days — due to the difficulty of getting the raws for this fic. So I ask for your understanding and support. It’s a short fanfic, but quite original, and I believe it’s worth the experience and worth adding to the list of translated works. The original title is in the reply to this review.
I have a mixed feelings about this story. I like, that mc is swordman with Kenpachi (from Bleach) template, but it also feels kind of bland overall. We don't get specified on what mc unlocks, he's just described as becoming stronger and stronger. I really can't take mc seriously. He's 5/6 years old and he drinks strong Chinese alcohol like a juice. Nobody is trying to stop him from doing that and treat him like an adult when it comes to it. We didn't get to know, how he gets money to constantly drink alcohol. Mc acts like emo and arrogant person. He's painfully written, especially when he's constantly saying, that he wants to prevent Anko from her getting Orochimaru's cursed seal, without explaining on how exactly he's going to do that, without trying to even warn Anko about him. I'm still giving this story a 4 star score because overall i had fun, while reading it. Story has its own issuses, but you can give it a try. Oh and og author is a bit of Uchiha enthusiast.
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Overall I like the MC due to how simple his way of thinking is and how he operates I didn't like though how he basically told Obito he knows about the eye of the moon plan. Their was really no reason to mention it.
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writing quality is quite good, as I couldn't find any mistakes. story is developing in a unique direction, and the premise is also quite good. I don't know why some other reviews are trashing it as some edgelord fic, because this is not that extreme. yes there are a few edgelord moments, but they don't feel excessive. characters are believable... mostly. they take rational actions and if you ignore that itachi was an intelligent genius, you will quite like how he is portrayed here, as a child. atleast I did. world background is not yet fully explored. but it doesn't feel stifled. conclusion: it is a good read, with a few edgelord moments here and there. I liked the portrayal of Itachi a lot. no one acts completely braindead
I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
Overall while I feel that some interpretations of characters in Naruto aren't properly accurate to their canon counterparts like Hiruzen. I just like this story because of how simple and refreshing the MC is. He just uses sword techniques and pure power to win.
I’m genuinely impressed by how gripping this story is! Every chapter pulls me deeper in — the world-building, the intensity, the emotional weight behind every decision… it all feels so alive. Your writing has a spark that makes the Naruto world feel new again. Thank you for putting so much heart into this fanfic. I’m truly enjoying every update. 💛
Uma das melhores histórias de Naruto que eu já li, achei a ideia do sistema muito boa, o fato do Minato começar a mostrar garras, e o respeito do protagonista em relação a certos personagens, enfim simplesmente uma fanfic maravilhosa
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Hi! I just wanted to tell you how much your story pulled me in every chapter felt like stepping into another world. Your writing has this effortless magic that turns simple scenes into something almost cinematic. Honestly, it would make such a stunning visual project someday. If you ever feel like exploring that idea, I’d be excited to collaborate. No expectations at all just wanted to share the thought. You can always reach out if you’d like to talk more or see my art. Thanks again for creating something so beautiful! You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love
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It's written quite well, but it's a harem novel, and I couldn't get past chapter 21. If you don't mind that it's a readable harem novel, harem novels make me sick.
It's okay. It'd be better if Mc wasn't an edglord who tried acting cool all the time, or at least the authors interpretation of cool. Seriously leaving a birthday party with a family friend because he 'can't stand' such a happy atmosphere. Just say you like being alone and daydreaming about slaughtering people on the battlefield and the pain of being alive.