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Your Sweet Presence

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作者: PEARL_WANG

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She was first daughter born in the family in 200 years, she was however forbidden to leave her Mansion, and considered a fortune lady, she was taught several skills by several Masters of their field, Bai Dongmei, the most considerate girl possessed 'Aura' giving her spiritual powers about which was partially unaware.
He was abandoned by his career oriented mother and was raised by his grandfather who doted on him. He was known as a rich spoiled brat, after his grandfather's death revealed his true identity as a founder of company in London. Later, he returns to his homeland for his business. Qian Jin, Mafia King of Emirates had a secret alliance with Bai Qi, the richest man and father of Dongmei, he is one of those with 'Aura' and the only one who knows Qian Jin also possess 'Aura' which gives him martial arts powers.
They are soulmates and were supposed to cultivate together, but Qian Jin trained himself alone which endangered Dongmei's life. Bai Qi, forces Qian Jin to marry his daughter in any case and don't let her die.
So what if they were soulmate? they did not love each other or did they not know what love is?
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Read Your Sweet Presence to know what it is like to be with your soulmate whom you don't love.
What is this Aura? why must they cultivate their powers? Will Qian Jin and Bai Dongmei who are like sun and moon actually live a happy life? or will they end their relationship after achieving the greater good and completing their cultivation?
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Support me with your love for the characters and bestow this author some power stones and gifts. Comment your thoughts and let me feel your sweet presence.
If you have any idea about my novel, feel free to tell me.
The chapters are not edited, if you find any typos, do point them out in paragraph comments.
This is my first contracted book and I really need your encouragement for creating the novel, so please leave a review and the book to your library.
Thank you,
your YSP author,
PEARL_WANG
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    Unmasked63

    Bai and Qian's relationship and dynamic is very interesting to me. The way they connect and full sprout together hasn't been fully shown yet but I already love it. Thank you author and keep up the great work!

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    NobleQueenBee

    Two unique lead characters. I am looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. The story is still in the early stages, but it has the potential to be a WN gem. 🎉

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    Kota_Sama

    A good way to start off a story, as most authors I've come across lately have had amazing stories. This story is yet another gem amongst the rubble that I've managed to find! As it is in the early stages I can't wait to see what unfolds over time. Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to seeing where this story ends up in the future!

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    Tridev3
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    The premise seems interesting. I'd say baring a few things whic could be easily fixed the novel is worth a shot. Keep it up author and keep pumping more chapters. peace;

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    Maizatul_Zakaria_6812

    Please! please ! Support this book. It's really a story about the 21st century Rapunzel.

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    Professor_Shy_1

    Wow! Honestly I'm truly impress by how each character attracts the attention of the reader. Just by reading the inception of the novel, one will that this novel is in line to be a generational WN masterpiece. I'm looking forward to more great chapters. keep it up author.

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    DeathWalker

    Two very unique and interesting characters with a story to tell. With an interesting mystery. Make me want to sit by a fire and enjoy a good read.

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    NixOrtikal

    I’ve only read up to chapter 21 but so far I like the writer’s flow and unique writing style. From the start her characters, especially Bai, are engaging and if you like lots of drama, angst and tension then this novel has it all. I think I need to read some more from this writer to see how the story develops over time.

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    Bibek_paul

    The synopsis is amazingly gripping which attracts the attain of readers. However, after going through the chapters, I can assure you that the world-building and character development are very high. In conclusion I loved the story and adding it to my reading list.Good work author :)

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    go_kizy

    A great book to begin with... the quote "opposites attract each other" literally came runnjng to my mind... a FL who hasn't witnessed much of the owrld while a ML who never stayed home, what more do we want... curious to know how their relationship would be going... good job author.. more power to you!!

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    OSM_1015

    Wow...❤️ It's super awesome dear author 💕 I love the improvement. All the best with the future updates 🤠 looking forward for the updates with pretty much excitement ☺️

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    Daoist5FxRSw

    a beautiful masterpiece! I love the story, from the beguiling characters to the exciting plot! I am addinf the book tomy library now asap! please continue to add more chapters

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    Daoist5FxRSw

    giving this 5 stars. i really liked the book. the characters are amazing and I love where the story is going. I am hooked, line and sinker and I cant wait to binge read more.

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    priyabolagani

    the way the story started with tension caught me. Two different personalities, two different prospective were met by the actions of fate. This is the story shows how well the author planned.

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    TheSystemWriter

    Good novel with great potential. The novel has two unique lead characters and I am looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. [img=recommend]

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    _mystique_

    When I first read the book, I felt like it was contemporary romance but it's actually fantasy romance. Apart from that, the author has made the wonderful use of imageries to describe the scenes by mentioning tiniest of the details. What I like most about the book is that both the main leads [ML and FL] have been wounded in the past and they come together to heal each other. It's sweet and perfectly written. if you like books of such genre, then do give it a read. You won't be disappointed, trust me.

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    Avalorian_

    An excellently written book with an amazing plot. The characters are well described and although it's still a bit early, it is already clear that this book has great potential. Good luck in WSA!

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    f0011
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    Immaculate beginning, great novel overall. I am not dissapointed of finding this novel, it's honestly a great read, and it gives you that compelling feeling, you know? Highly recommend this story to anyone!

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    Daoistbips

    the best line I find in the 2nd chapter is" is your girlfriend pregnant??? " lol... like the start of the novel..two different personalities fall in love with each other such a good concept ..will like to see the growth of the characters...love it.. 🥤🥤

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    Lu_Shui
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    Hi Pearl! The story tells about two families : the Qian and the Bai family. The first 10 chapters mostly talk about the Bai family. I find the drama and interaction in both families engaging, but the constant switch between the stories should be avoided IMHO. Maybe start with the Qian family because the opening chapter was amazing, but then make one switch to the Bai family up until Qian Jin appears on TV. I hope things are improving for Qian Mu. Poor boy born to yet another despicable father. Please pay more attention to the capitalization and structure, do not rush with the plot. Otherwise you are doing very well. Good job!

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