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Why K? Why not just Kanye?

Ah, I like these chapters the best…

Isn’t the ‘characters take his lyrics super literally’ getting a bit old now? I mean it was funny at the start but it’s starting to get a bit much….

Right now, it’s kinda funny sure, but it’s just speed running through episodes. So it’s just what if Saitama was in every episode? We need to see more of his story rather him just cameoing in MHA… Or just avoid the plot all together. Otherwise it’s gonna get a bit dull.

I can’t believe you missed a chance to use the ‘Hey you! You’re finally awake’ line… Shame on you.

Author if you have trouble editing etc, before you post the chapter, paste the entire thing into ChatGPT and ask it for a quick editing. Should make things read a lot nicer. Probably faster than a conventional editor too…

This chapter needs editing really badly

What’s disgusting about calling for reinforcements in the middle of a war? Strange perspectives man…

Duval getting accidentally shafted is pretty par for the course lol.

Cedric hasn’t learned any kind of Haki yet. All his powers are due to the Method and 6 Marine arts so far

You should delete the previous chapter Author. Will make chapter numbers sync up again. (and stop annoying my OCD…)

Does this mean less angst moving forward? Please say it is so!

Aiden Silvereye? Coincidence?

Author - Other authors might start from a fetus, but I will go One. Step. Further. BEYOND!!

Tbh, I could see it. Quality kinda fell after approaching 200 and story started meandering a lot more. Well, I enjoyed the story until then and even after it wasn’t too bad. Thanks anyway!

Kingpin very OOC here. Reads like a Chinese villain instead of methodical and measured like he should be (except his berserk rages, but that’s part of his character).

Galactus doesn’t just randomly eat planets. He eats planets that have celestial eggs. It’s to stop them over populating. The mortals on planets are just collateral.

It’s funny that author is writing all kinds of stuff about other countries and but is afraid of writing about the national political parties… >American two party system, not even once…