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The are still in the 4 simulation after 400 chapters the author forgot about the main story

I am convinced that this site is pushing this novel this is the second review I just got to chapter 1000 that is when he gets to second order the story is so rambling so much nonsense that can be skipped or said in a couple word become 5 or 6 chapters

I am on chapter 725 the story is soooo slow I just want to know when he gets to second order

Bad word building a lot of things go unexplained like what is the skill tree they are talking about some time he gets random skills from it and other time he just find the best skill in random places, they don’t explain if he only has it or does everyone else have it because it seem like it is just him and the power scaling is terrible

There is no world building, no character development. The title does not fit the story, no one has there own personality, just plain janes. No build up to action just bang and if anything get to hard here is the system to power up the mc. All in all just boring

On 127 a lot of useless information is given like stat, abilitiess and other things that are not important to the story because they are never used. Battles are just text with saying they died or it is going to be a hard fight then go to the end. No really writing skills just a very basic story with a lot of rubbish information just to make the word count bigger.

Does it go back to normal

I am on chapter 600 and I am dropping this because the speed of the story is tooo slow and to many unnecessary chapters. The story is ok but too many time has the author over explain the female body and other then the main character the other male character have lack of story or development

There is no world building There is almost no character Devlopment if you are rich in this world and not part of the mc group You Bully the weak and fear the strong. i dont understand why they have not kick the mom out i was on chapter 190 and the two daughters said kick her out but the mc said keep her. he called her rude attitude quirky Overall it is a bad read

So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time

Translation Does not make sense Sometimes And the story is terrible, to many mistake and the mc should be invincible with his stats but they make him out to be like everyone else

The book is a good read but there is some problems characters feel empty the main character Acts like the world around him is less important than him making the world feel empty they talk about other cities but the world doesn’t feel big I’m on chapter 200 I stop reading it not because but because the Story developed way too slowly I’m on chapter 200 and it only has four dishes the story has no action whatsoever it is a very peaceful book so if you like that go read it

The writing quality is very good there’s nothing bad I can say about it the problem is that the story develops to slowly if there even is one the main character is going back and visiting all his old companions but because they’re in the story for so short it’s hard to get to know them or even there story it is a good read if you have a lot of time but if you want action or something with more substance you can skip this one I’m on 50 And I will drop this book but all in all it is a good read

I’m on chapter 40 so far the plot has been bouncing to and fro it is hard to understand some chapters I’m basically lost I saw a comment saying to read up to chapter 50 I will try to get to 51 if still bad I will keep this review Up If I change my mind I will fix the review