See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 -8 Rune Codes (Mandatory to read)
Fantasy · Sach_Official
hmm, as a fellow readers (yes, I'm a huge bingie reader too despite being an author!) I would say some things here. Not as an author, but as a reader myself who love to craving for some brain food in the midnight! - Try not to overusing words "The" and "," punctuation. It was pretty messy when you are using those two too much. - Avoid dumping information in bracket, it was a huge turn off for many readers. Good thing that I'm a readers who used with MTL, so this is not a big deal for me, but may be a huge deal for many readers. Example: ...... where human and monos (....)-> you can discard this info in the bracket. Maybe you can replace it with .....where the human and the unique being with some superb abilities named monos who ..... or second option, you can just continue without those explanation and save the info later in aux chapters (most of my fav book has this one!) grammar side, I won't comment much since I have no rights to comment this as I'm not a good grammar checker as well. Hope it could help and cheers buddy, welcome to the writing club of WN!
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ch 0 1 Awakening
Fantasy · NoWoRRyMaN
erm..... *run away
"This sword was meant to kill him. A vampire is weak against the silver. So..."
Urban · Sach_Official
and second, there is a secret behind of it, you got to read more to know
ch 0 5 Learning Rune Magic (Part 1)
Fantasy · Sach_Official
well buddy, the truth is. I don't even have enough resources to have a consultant or an editor. It costs like 200-300$/month, while I'm starting here without any resources. So yeah, sorry for the confusion, I will talk to the recruited editor once I could afford one.
ch 0 5 Learning Rune Magic (Part 1)
Fantasy · Sach_Official
thanks for the correction! sorry for not replying recently.
Those voices were running Chris's mind amok as he walked towards the massive door with a small hole that fits the average human's finger.
Fantasy · Sach_Official
ask the author right away, she has the discord
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Reborn
Heroic Conquest: Anti-Hero In Another World
Fantasy · iDagon