EndOfTheGlory - Profile

Дохуя полезный отзыв конечно, хоть объяснил бы свою точку зрения.

Well, fair points, perhaps I will give it another chance. But the start was so confusing, that it just turned me off.

The story is a mess. Honestly, even if I am not from cult of logic and plot holes, there are so many mistakes and said plotholes in this book, that my brain is almost perpetually confused. First of all, you see a Goddess of Death from dying pantheon that SOMEHOW grants him the system that defies all logic. Just HOW? Some dying goddess that took pity in mortal, who "supposed" to be her Master as Master of Death could grant THAT MUCH? I am not even talking about her motivation. Because, seriously, let's imagine you're a literal Goddess with all psychological mess this upbringing instills in you. Would you do so much to help a simple dying mortal child, that she no doubt has encountered plenty through her long lifetime, that was supposed to be your Master? And this Master of Death cliche. Ok, I am not exactly against it, but can someone please say how the f**k did the thing came up to be? Or at least throw some mystery in there, so that I would keep banging my head at how ridiculous it all looks like? So, here is some mortal family that have gained the fu**ing authority (HOW!?!?)over the CONCEPT OF DEATH IN MULTIVERSE (just imagine this thing) and they are not topdogs, even if all Gods of Death know about it, and they still somehow died out to leave only our poor boy Potter behind. Just. What? And this is just the beginning. I am not even talking about not so complex writing style, that honestly irritates me, about not placing big characters where they are supposed to be and halting the reading. The whole novel looks extremely childish and from some interaction that I've found at the end of the novel (I skipped obviously, couldn't bring myself to read it), it's still as cringy as you can get. The only good thing I can say is that author is popping chapters like a madman. It's very surprising and commending. So, all in all, you have some obvious teenager author with all the disadvantages that comes with it. Read with caution.