still don't know who Lara is
I quickly with my sword enveloped in a flow of blue ki cut her attack in half splitting Lara's sides and causing an explosion right behind me.
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
Lara?
I wouldn't mind starting in the second phase, but I prefer to participate in more battles since I started training my control over Ki I'm sure there would still be enough energy left for Lara to fight in the finals.
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
shouldn't tags be tails?
"AS YOU ALL KNOW WE WILL HAVE 3 STEPS IN OUR CEREMONY, THE FIRST BEING A TOURNAMENT BETWEEN OUR WARRIORS TO DECIDE WHO IS THE STRONGEST OF THEIR GENERATION, THE SECOND STAGE OF THE CEREMONY WE WILL MAKE OUR WARRIORS AWAKEN HIS INNER APE WHICH CONTROLS YOU WITH MORE SPEED WILL BE THE WINNER THOSE WHO DO NOT KEEP CONTROL WILL HAVE THEIR TAGS CUT OFF AND THUS DEPRIVED OF THEIR INNER POWER, THE THIRD STAGE WILL BE A FOOD COMPETITION IT SERVES TO SUPPLY THE ENERGY OF OUR WARRIORS AND STRENGTHEN OUR FIGHTING SPIRIT" says Borgos again.
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
hope this continues
ch 0 9 9 An important meeting
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
good beginning to bad it was left to die so to speak
ch 0 6 Cap 6 The Plan
Fantasy · SharonMeuToba
seems good so far, but I need more to fully form an opinion
ch 0 5 The Night of Awakening Part 3
Realistic · SharonMeuToba
pls continue been awhile since I have found a Naruto fan fic. I like this much.
Guys, I started writing an authorial book and I would like you to support my creation, as I currently have a lot of free time, you could comment on the continuation of this fanfic if you want.
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
I hope this continues
ch 0 9 Origin
Movies · ManofcultureQ_Q
thx for the chapter, and it's fine if chapter length varies.
ch 25 Sussurations...
Fantasy · Zestar19
I hope the story continues it was just getting good
ch 0 9 Mysterious Person
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
a draw? mikoru was gonna kill him though?
"H-Hey wait.... only competitors are allowed to fight." The announcer had no choice and decided to end the fight with a draw.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
can't be handsome, doesn't get to pick skills, and loses his family. I hope things get better for mikoru
Mikoru is crying inside the sphere, he can't do anything his not strong enough to protect those he loved. He past out tears are still falling down from his eyes.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
since webnovel is only letting me comment in this one section, I'll add my other comments here as well. no elf immortality/long life, the girl(I am assuming the goddess reincarnating him) is just allowed to mess up him, being handsome with that cake stunt
Mikoru is having a hard time choosing. After a few minutes Mikoru choose the color red. With a white hair and red eye combination he would look like a badass person.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
thought it was silver hair?
Mikoru is having a hard time choosing. After a few minutes Mikoru choose the color red. With a white hair and red eye combination he would look like a badass person.
Fantasy · RizzlelTSU
hope you find time to continue this
ch 11 Tournament: continuation
Marvel: Saiyajin Race
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba