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I like it so far. But why choose Kuisha as a wife? Unless you plan to do the 'canon RIas' shenanigans and do a rating game to get out of the marriage?

John Wick> Cyberpunk> Others. Just to get more jump points and get his factory updated even more before he starts to tangle with more esoteric powers.

I can't recall any HS DxD fics were Rias is just left to fend for herself. Someone always saves her, and it would be nice for a change of pace.

And here is me foreshadowing that the MC will save Rias, and she will fall in love with him and be in his harem going forward. Can you just not do that?

I think I like it because it ISN'T focused on Konoha or the Naruto timeline. IIRC, Uzushio was destroyed around the second shinobi war, if the MC can learn sealing arts, could probably get some goodies from them, or he could defect to Uzu and help save them. Lots of options going forward, will the MC play the Paragon path or Renegade?

He definitely needs to figure out which relationship he's going to pursue, or he will be a victim of one of T. Swift's famous ex-bf songs. You'd think he would have known that prior to getting involved with her. It's one thing to be in a relationship with a singer and it ends, it's another when she sings about you cheating on her. Or, he could just be single and date around. Either way, he needs to fix it or it is going to be embarrassing.

Forgort to add this, but if he is a certified ruler, he will be able to give 100% credence to whether Jesus of Nazareth was a real person or just made up hog wash. It would especially be true when he is still alive an kicking well after Jesus died. Just remember though for future chapters, 536 AD was probably the worst year in human history: https://www.cnn.com/2018/11/20/health/worst-year-536-scli-intl/index.html#:~:text=A%20massive%20volcanic%20eruption%20spewed,of%20Nottingham%20in%20the%20UK.

Just started reading this and I have binged it. I love this! Such an interesting and unique take on every single ME FF out there.

It still irks me how the MC is all " woe is you, I'm sowwy for killing you" when every reality he goes to is a doomed one that will be destroyed. It literally doesn't matter what he does in them, as low and behold, they will end regardless of his actions.

I like the story, but MC has broken the first rule and benefit of multiversal travel: getting a harem.

Not all chapters need to be a manifesto, sometimes a nice 1-2k chapter with slice of life and warm and fuzzies is good as well

500*500=250,000 in a 1 hour block 250,000*10 =2,500,000 per day @ 10 hours a day 2,500,000*365=912,500,000 @365 days of continuous operations

The math checks out. if you figure it takes 45 minutes to 'cure' and the other 15 minutes in a one-hour block is used for getting a patient in/out of the cradle and getting a new patient in, you would get 5000 people in a day if you only do it for 10 hours.

The Essence of the Archmage is fucking OP and I love it. If he ever goes under a secondary mutation late in the story, Essence of the Blank should be next, those two combined make for a terrifying existence.

Life is pessimistic and depressing

Glad that you are back. There aren't many Tony Stark "fix-it" fics and I'm excited to see where you take the story.

Good luck with your future endeavors. I have genuinely enjoyed your stories.