I want to like it but it feels like it's AI generated. The entire first chapter feels mechanical, not a stilted kind of writing style but literally written by a machine. No one talks like in the US. Saying people's full name in conversation, what makes it worse is that it's supposed to be a conversation between family. I'm hoping it's just a bad translation and that the story was written by a Chinese writer pretending to know how things are done in the US.
ch 0 1 New Life
Urban · Tree Of Eternity
Makes sense. Water, wood or sunlight. Sunlight power seems like it could make things interesting
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Vismian Grass
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Jesus christ. If it wasn't for the high reviews I would've stopped reading at this chapter. There's no way his flaw is being changed to "must answer all questions with the truth" instead of "can not lie" because one is bearable to read and the other would make this story into complete garbage. Please buddah, have the MC just keep his mouth shut.
ch 17 Three Simple Words
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Agreed. Poop is an acquired taste
This was a bit much. It has passed the point of being funny into the realm of utter garbage. Just how many times is watching someone slip on a banana peel funny? So author decided to change it into slipping on a banana and breaking both legs to make it funnier? Garbage chapter.
ch 11 In Cliches, the One That Seems the Least Likely to Be the Culprit Is Usually the Culpri
Eastern · 7 Percent
I'd rather not get known as a beta player and get hunted down by millions of people when the worlds combine. Especially if I have a little sister that I love and I'm trying to protect. He somehow knows they aren't going to talk about this in the forums? Not tell other people? He was a slave and lived a horrendous life but suddenly his life experience is thrown away and the author turns him into an idiot.
ch 28 Eye of the tornado
Fantasy · Yolohy
This is what happens when an idiot that's never played games decides to write a gaming novel.
ch 17 Lucky start
Fantasy · Yolohy
Makes you feel like Chinese players are a different breed everytime I read these gaming stories. I've been a gaming nerd my whole life and never encountered this. Only when you f up in a competitive game have I heard and read so much trash talking, otherwise you literally get ignored or ignore everyone else.
ch 0 8 Body tempering
Fantasy · Yolohy
Average at best. Also the MC is an idiot. In the first 20 chapters the MC literally tells the reader he wouldn't waste his golden finger to benefit others and also wants to keep it a secret but on the literal next paragraph he goes ahead and uses his super secret cheat skill on someone else's dog. It's not contracted but it belongs to someone else. He says he'll just contract it if it comes to it but AGAIN it's NOT his dog. Then instead of once or twice for experimenting, he uses his cheat 5 or 6 times on a beast that's NOT HIS. Oh I'm sure the author will make so there's no consequences but that's not because it makes sense for the story but because of the deus ex machina main character bs the author will just pull out his ass. Still gonna read a bit more hoping the author will learn to write without being stupid but don't have high hopes.
Beast Taming: I Can Evolve Infinitely
Eastern · Desert Paramecium