Webnovel Author: Phantomfiend - Novel Collection

This story prioritizes survival, so romance is not be a central theme. However, as the plot unfolds and characters develop, there could be opportunities for connection (a slower burn romance), though it likely wouldn't be as prominent as stories in the romance genre. But for now, I can only say there isn't. I'm sorry.

I think the author really knows the topic of this story very well. He made it neat and nice. As long as I read, I was lost in comfort. There is nothing distracting in the style and structure of the writing. I just focused on how the story would unfold. But..., Yeah. The pace is quite slow I think. That's fine. Nothing's wrong with it.

Can you give me this kind of review too?

You use too much Onomatopoeia. In one chapter, 3 to 5 are enough. That's the maximum amount. If there are too many, the reader's reading flow will be disrupted. Also, don't combine Onomatopoeia words in a sentence. That's not good writing. Let one Onomatopoeia word itself be on a separate line. Out of 5 chapters, chapter 4 was really uncomfortable to read. The structure is probably something I rarely or never see in other webnovels I've read. I suggest reading other similar webnovels to be able to imitate the writing style and structure.

This webnovel is fascinating. I'm usually too picky when it comes to female leads. But from chapters 1 to 5, I felt comfortable and relaxed while read it without being distracted by anything. The writing is good and the pace of the story is not messy. I recommend this. This is a webnovel with a good female lead.

Mind Blowing! Such Masterpiece is Godly Arts! Amazing Story! Gorgeous Writing! Consistent Updates! Awe-Inspiring World Background! Twisted Plot! Oh, well. It's not easy to write this review.