This story is fire as of chapter 30. The concept is especially good, I hope it keeps going in the direction where Matthew creates his organization, controls the world and we see the evolution of humans over especially long periods of time. If you keep going in this direction, I have no doubt that your story will be in the top 10 all time with more chapters. Also I suggest you rename it to simply ‘Time Merchant’ to be more elegant. Keep going author!
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Well, I would not even bother commenting if I did not like the story, so do not take it the wrong way. I am simply frustrated that I can’t read it due to the headache that I get when my brain autocorrects the grammar. Have you tried copy pasting the chapters into a corrector tool such as grammarly? It would improve things within under 5 minutes...
ch 0 4 Chaos in both worlds
Games · easyread
The most forced stuff is his necessity to train harder than the main characters. What bullshit. The system is a 10x reward, he should be able to lay flat and become OP as long as he lays low and waits a little, why is he so restless to get stronger? It’s so nonsensical! He has already bound it to his twin sister who is supposed to be a monster for god’s sake. Anyway it leaves a bad taste due to this unnecessary route.
Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1