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Is that supposed to make it better? You can't just translate the words themselves. You have to understand the languages enough to basically rewrite it in the other language meeting the same thing that's what a translator does. That's not what you're doing.
"Sigh* Why are you suck a snack?"
Douluo V: I, Huo Yuhao, won't be a Coward
Anime & Comics · Karma_shi
Dude, your grammar is so bad that your sentences don't make sense. That was the purpose of my comment end of story. I don't need you to try and explain to me your story. Just write it in a way that I can get it by reading.
Huo Yuhao interrupted the Skydream Ice Silkworm's bragging and urged it to enter his body quickly.
Douluo V: I, Huo Yuhao, won't be a Coward
Anime & Comics · Karma_shi
Oh my God, you're not listening if something doesn't make sense that means it's a flaw in the story you don't use flaws to try and make your character more "special" this is so unbelievably stupid. like go read a real book by a real published author with an editor behind them and everything and you'll see the difference in quality between anything you will find here and whatever it is you choose out there
"That's right. These are a set of blank evil pieces. Once you merge the king piece, this set will evolve into evil pieces exclusive to you, or rather, demon evil pieces."
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?
Anime & Comics · XElenea
Any way you could explain all that one or two sentences?
"That's right. These are a set of blank evil pieces. Once you merge the king piece, this set will evolve into evil pieces exclusive to you, or rather, demon evil pieces."
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?
Anime & Comics · XElenea
I understand the concept I'm saying the concept is stupid
"That's right. These are a set of blank evil pieces. Once you merge the king piece, this set will evolve into evil pieces exclusive to you, or rather, demon evil pieces."
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?
Anime & Comics · XElenea
It's not vague it was a very direct explanation. You decided to add onto it. I'm taking it exactly how it was presented to me.
So now, he is using the standardized weapon provided by Loki Familia, and its strength is more than sufficient up to the 10th floor.
Anime: Infinite Swordsman! (Danmachi + Asterisk War)
Anime & Comics · Tom_22
That's about the same as never flying on a plane because there's the chance it could crash and you could die people still do it because overall it's pretty safe
"It's not... all bad..." The god said, slowly realizing the point that Jason was making.
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Literally almost all of them
Huo Yuhao interrupted the Skydream Ice Silkworm's bragging and urged it to enter his body quickly.
Douluo V: I, Huo Yuhao, won't be a Coward
Anime & Comics · Karma_shi
Dude, your English is so bad that that sentence did not make sense and your explanation makes even less sense who was the glutton?
"Sigh* Why are you suck a snack?"
Douluo V: I, Huo Yuhao, won't be a Coward
Anime & Comics · Karma_shi
Your English is so bad so incredibly bad is this a translation?
"No permission!"
Douluo V: I, Huo Yuhao, won't be a Coward
Anime & Comics · Karma_shi
OK, I'm done. I'm tired of rereading paragraphs randomly entire chapters after they initially appeared.
Something that wasn't the pitiful lifeforms that were in her way. The power of the Void had been blown all over the city of Kuoh by the wind, indicating regular usage of the power she had gifted the Demon Emperor and concealing the source of the power from her senses unless she dared to contact an ally who would be able to differentiate the false trails created by the wind from the trail that would lead her to her target.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
Oh my God, it's like you just can't help but make this more and more boring. You give him the two most boring of the three familiars you give him magic that's boring as hell you give him abilities that are also incredibly boring. I mean, all they really are is a mod copy of the original protagonist abilities, which is stupid and then all the way back to the beginning, he shouldn't have been a knight to begin with doesn't make sense Rias would have made him a rook given the situation
'Well, two out of three.' He should've known the one that reminded him of Nunnally would refuse to follow him, instead choosing to vanish into a fiery teleportation.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
That's not how dodgeball works
There were about three balls available and Sona's Peerage had won the coin toss regarding who got to attack first.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
We're missing entire scenes here
the same. Akeno revealed hers next, some kind of strange emerald imp creature.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
Murder doesn't mean more brutal
"I could, but that wouldn't do my brutality justice." Lelouch replied dryly, his grin not fading in the slightest.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
That legitimately sounds awful actually the entire idea that you need to name everything like this is stupid. It doesn't need a name. It just needs to be used.
Black Knight, that almost drew a chuckle out of Lelouch. 'Arm of the Blackest Knight.' He decided, it didn't sound too bad and it had a couple different meanings depending on how someone heard it.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
Did you mean to have them say go to hell?
"Damn you Kiba." Lelouch and Koneko growled together before the blond boy went "Been there done that, I'm a Devil remember?!" Causing the pair to facepalm at the horrible joke Kiba had just subjected them to.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
Ben where and done what? What was this a response to?
"Damn you Kiba." Lelouch and Koneko growled together before the blond boy went "Been there done that, I'm a Devil remember?!" Causing the pair to facepalm at the horrible joke Kiba had just subjected them to.
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864
I should probably also let you know that the chapters are really disorganized around chapter 120 for your Harry Potter fanfic on Pa*treon
ch 25 War
Marvel: Rise of the Undead Monarch
Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk