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The plot was pretty standard: FL gets a second chance and tries to do her best to repay the ML for his help and care in her previous life. I didn´t expect there to be many plot twists but I´m glad to see that she´s finally standing up for herself. The novel is well written/well translated. I enjoy reading stories with good character development and I hope she will get back at that scum of a husband.

While the plot is well thought out, the story development is questionable. It goes in circles and some conversations feel too shallow. I enjoyed the beginning but later on, it didn´t feel engaging enough. However, I commend the detailed description of their work life.

The first chapter already got me hooked! Your writing style improved throughout every chapter, but what´s most impressive is your creativity in portraying your characters. There is much depth in your character portrayal and their background story. I can´t wait to read more!

The first chapter already got me hooked. The FL is really relatable considering that we´re the same age and I´m more of an introvert myself^^ All the characters are authentic, meaning that their actions and thought process are both realistic and relatable. The author does a great job mixing action, humor, and character development.

The plot is very well thought out and although the FL is vindictive she´s still down-to-earth and caring when it comes to her family. After going through such extreme bullying and going back in time, not only is she good at planning out how to crush her different targets, but she´s also learning from her past experience. Learning to adapt quickly, to behave and dress differently, and to judge people better. Some grammatical errors can be found here and there but the story development will make you forget those. The author added some mystery and bone-chilling moments that leave you wanting more.