That was the duel...that was more a less 100 words.
They started circling each other. A thrust here and there to test each other's defenses. Eventually Lomas attacked the boy and tgey went at it. Lomas was by far the more experienced and ot showed but the boy hung in there through sheer talent and force of will. Eventually Lomas disarmed him and placed the blade on his neck.
Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 66 Interrupting has its consequences
Video Games · ARandomMob
you're adding way too many flowery words that just aren't necessary to have.
Her search led her to the depths of the castle, to a chamber long forgotten and not used for a long time by all.
TV · MrGood23
Within the Red Keep, in the King's private chambers, the scent of herbs and the sharp tang of iron filled the air. Viserys lay upon his bed, a shadow of the robust king he once was. The Grand Maester's hands moved with a grim determination, excising the rotten flesh from his festered wounds. Each slice, each removal of rotted skin, was a silent testament to the fragility of life, even for a king.
TV · MrGood23
What's with the broken up paragraphs.
excitement and apprehension.
Anime & Comics · XEM
'You got 'em, tiger,' he thought, feeling a surge of confidence.
Anime & Comics · XEM
Really...a bour injured him, even if his Asgardian blood is only at 15, they have remarkable durability, and are way stronger than normal humans. That should have been an easy fight.
Yet, Aerion felt a surge of excitement. He consciously placed his sword within the space ring and sprinted towards the boar, leaping high into the air. His hands came together like a hammer as he descended, smashing down onto the boar.
TV · MrGood23
thanks for the chapter
ch 24 Watching the Stars
Anime & Comics · AngelicTL
I've not finished Dune yet so I don't know about that.
" I see now my golden path, one where I am the emperor of all that is known to man." A chuckle escaped his lips." Come, Karni, we have things to do."
Book&Literature · Kingoffrogs
"ARGH! Just leave me alone" He growled, trying to hide his pain and discomfort.
Sports · leeroycgna
Thanks for the chapter
ch 15 marbled throne.
Book&Literature · Kingoffrogs
What happened to forging his own destiny, then poof one old lady appears and he snaps all of that.
" I see now my golden path, one where I am the emperor of all that is known to man." A chuckle escaped his lips." Come, Karni, we have things to do."
Book&Literature · Kingoffrogs
Was that also not intentional Author.
The moment the words came out of his mouth, Ken instantly regretted it. He could see the light from Daichi's eyes pale a little and his fists clench as he stood in silence for a while.
Sports · leeroycgna
But i thought he was stronger then daichi, now he's weaker then him???
While he had improved his batting, it was nowhere near the level of Daichi's. He lacked the Coordination and power to slog balls like his friend, at least for now. He suddenly regretted not taking that Balance and Coordination Elixir last night instead of the Agility.
Sports · leeroycgna
So he can't hit something a 9 to 12-year-old could throw...AND HIT.
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Sports · leeroycgna
But using the same muscle groups, he's still doing similar movements like abduction, not to mention the shock of hitting a ball and the force used swinging a bat.
The only problem was his batting skills. As the Ace pitcher on the team, his poor batting skills were overlooked due to how much value he had brought the team while defending.
Sports · leeroycgna
Ken did not hesitate as he began to spam the no button to decline the mission. This had touched his bottom line, there was no way that he could take himself off the mound, especially now since he had another chance.
Sports · leeroycgna
Thanks for the chapter
ch 38 Chapter 37
Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave
Anime & Comics · The_oneandonly344