バッジ 10
Moments 39
(bunk bed)
She staggered getting up before slumping back down onto the bunker bed her eyes burning. She felt a strange sensation as her murderous aura strengthened.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasy · Kim_Li_0078
oh my .... that is very heartless.
"They are half-siblings and their genes would match, don't worry... There is no way the fetus's bone marrow is affected by poison, it's just four months...." Huo Yan's cold voice ordered him on what to do, and knowing there was no future for the fetus, they would have to make use of it now while it was still alive.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasy · Kim_Li_0078
depression, narcolepsy, laziness
She can't wake up from sleep!
Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage
General · Gongsun Xiaoyue
this guy doesn't sound attractive - he is pasty with crypt keeper hands, creepy eyes and it sounds like he needs an immediate transfusion. Yuk!
A hand with distinct joints was placed on the guardrail. The fingers attached to that hand were slim, long, and clean, and there was a string of prayer beads held in them. The blood-red prayer beads offset the fair fingers and made them look even fairer.
Almighty Daughter Runs The World
Urban · Deutsche Unforgotten
continuity? if they are at the auction, how can Yuqi make soup already?????
"Young Master Yi, bad news! After Old Master drank the soup from Lady Yuqi, he suddenly had a high fever. The doctor said that Old Master's condition has worsened and he is in the emergency room right now. Please, come to the hospital!"
Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!
Urban · Nunu
how can a plane land on a helicopter pad? is it a transformer?
One of them was a Boeing 747sp, a limited version worldwide. One cost 1.4 billion yuan, which was the same model as a certain head of the land's plane.
Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!
Urban · Nunu
I can use some proofreading, too.
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family…
Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!
Urban · Nunu
proofreading is essential. the author is confusing thr characters
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family…
Turns Out, I'm from a Real Aristocratic Family!
Urban · Nunu
Proofreading needed bc of character and gender confusion.
You Luan dealt with the situation skillfully, to the extent that the following day, media headlines were filled with reports of Li Zizi's lies and attempt to frame her colleague. Internet users hurled curses at Li Zizi, claiming he had a flawed character, poor upbringing, and was a conniving person. Some even uncovered footage of Li Zizi being assaulted by his ex-wife when he was her mistress. In an instant, Li Zizi's reputation spread throughout Ancheng City.
A Hidden Pampered Marriage: Boss’ Beloved Wife
Urban · Cleansing Tree
some serious proofreading needed. character confusion throughout the story.
Before leaving work, Shen Qingyue received a call from Shen Jun, asking her to go back with him. He mentioned that their grandfather had organized a family dinner.
I Married the Second Male Lead After Reincarnating
Urban · Warmth
did I miss it? when did she realize that her husband is the cheater's uncle?
ch 0 5 This man is Huo Xiting? The Scumbag's Uncle?
Mrs. Huo Pretends to be Weak Every Day
Urban · Ye Shiyuan
something is missing. what does his black eyes have to do with what he has to say?
Huo Xiting's black eyes were dark, and he said slowly, with a bewitching tone, "Miss Ye, are you sure... that you are going to support me for the rest of my life?"
Mrs. Huo Pretends to be Weak Every Day
Urban · Ye Shiyuan
this is out of context with the narrative of the story so far
Ye Beisheng was really shameless. She had just broken up with Yanling and had found another man so quickly!
Mrs. Huo Pretends to be Weak Every Day
Urban · Ye Shiyuan
yeah, there are a lot of spelling and phrasing mistakes
Ye Beisheng pmomentarilymoment before asking an odd question, "Sir, do you still want to work hard for the rest of your life?"
Mrs. Huo Pretends to be Weak Every Day
Urban · Ye Shiyuan
proofreading is needed. when there are errors like this, it hinders the story a bit.
She didn't think about how this man knew her surname was Ye. Ither first time proposingposed to a stranger, and Ye Beisheng was a little nervous.
Mrs. Huo Pretends to be Weak Every Day
Urban · Ye Shiyuan
she has cute attitude
However, Shi Xiu turned around and told Miss An, "I can work here! I'm a college junior! I'm of age; I can work!"
After the Fake Young Lady Stole Everything from Me, I Became the World's Sweetheart
Urban · Mountain Springs
funny chapter. even the seagulls didn't stand a chance.
ch 0 7 A Gift for Mother: A Pirate Ship
Adorable Twins: My Mother Is a Cool Miracle Doctor!
History · Shengshi Tiange
funny
Heavens, was this a tune?
Adorable Twins: My Mother Is a Cool Miracle Doctor!
History · Shengshi Tiange
push-ups are real pressure ...
The following morning, Su Wei Wei woke up at 5 a.m. and began doing some pressure-ups inside the cell on the empty floor.
Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides
Fantasy · Kim_Li_0078