RkArnold

11d

Commented

bwahahaha ok this chapter cracked me up...

ch 696 It's An Honor

Let's Divorce As Agreed

Urban · Flyingfish Thistledown

RkArnold

16d

Commented

change like Trump.... OMG I laughed so hard... alas American politics have bled over into my Chinese fluff novels. *sigh* so much for escapism.

ch 665 Birthday Party

Let's Divorce As Agreed

Urban · Flyingfish Thistledown

RkArnold

26d

Commented

more nope. it's gaslighting to make someone apologize for being manhandled and violated. no. I dont give two s**** what your "logic" is for putting your hands on your spouse in anger. no cutsie after moment would fix that. this would be the beginning of the end for me. you tell toddlers to "use your words" Ethan is way too old not to know that.

ch 459 Curse word: Washboard

The Rise of the White Lotus

General · BAJJ

RkArnold

26d

Commented

nope Ethan just lost all cred. you don't get to use your rage to "teach" someone you love anything.

ch 458 I hate you

The Rise of the White Lotus

General · BAJJ

RkArnold

30d

Commented

empathy, not emphatic

ch 427 You're crazy, do you know that?

The Rise of the White Lotus

General · BAJJ

RkArnold

1mth

Commented

it's "bye Felicia" bc being curt is part of the insult... "see you later Felicia" is too wordy ..lol... movie quotes from the nineties for one hundred Alex.

ch 301 See you later, felicia~

The Rise of the White Lotus

General · BAJJ

RkArnold

2mth

Commented

oh I'm sure my wife and daughter will enjoy meeting you Charlene. here's to a happy cooperation. I'll have to trouble you to show up in a couple of weeks while i make arrangements for your internship.

ch 458 Pretty Lucky

Let's Divorce As Agreed

Urban · Flyingfish Thistledown

RkArnold

5mth

Commented

bwahaha I Love Shu Pan! tell him girl, right to his face. lol

ch 256 Joy's Dad Is An A**hole?

Let's Divorce As Agreed

Urban · Flyingfish Thistledown

RkArnold

7mth

Posted

I'm enjoying this book. at about chapter 250 the author makes a stupid mistake that makes me enjoy it less. the plot requires an addictive drug, and the author chose "hemp". you make rope out of hemp. it's related to marijuana and has some psychoactive components, but it's not addictive either and certainly doesn't kill people unless you hang them with a rope. the lack of basic research by the author makes it hard to suspend my disbelief and hope this episode passes soon. the author would have done better to choose something like cocoa leaf which can do all the things needed for the story line. other than this big gaping hole in the story it's been a fun read, but not a serious one. I Can ignore the stupid little things, but when it drives the whole plot it's distractingly stupid. overall the writing is good and I Like the characters and their development, pei gan and aunt luo are well developed side characters that are fully three dimensional. I think this author can be awesome with some judicious editing to remove or correct certain bad choices in the plot development.

I Woke the Sick and Disabled Prince on Our Wedding Night

General · Fan Sauce

RkArnold

7mth

Commented

good world and character development. romance, war- religious and otherwise, familial drama, court intrigue, the whole shebang. awesome story worth your time reading. thank you author for your efforts.

ch 270 The epilogue (2)

The Cursed Tyrant and His Reluctant Queen

History · xiaohai_23

RkArnold

9mth

Commented

you can tell it's a fantasy when you have two female doctors and there's an immediate appt available...

ch 32 HOSPITAL

Chasing After My Wife

Urban · _frieyaVida

RkArnold

1yr

Replied to RkArnold

oh yeah and a "single sofa" ...is a chair. loveseats have two seats, sofas have three or more....

ch 39 CAN'T YOU KNOCK THE DOOR?

It's Hard to Control My Naughty Wife!

Urban · jikanyotomare

RkArnold

1yr

Commented

dresser not buffet. dresser is for clothes. buffet is for food.

ch 39 CAN'T YOU KNOCK THE DOOR?

It's Hard to Control My Naughty Wife!

Urban · jikanyotomare

RkArnold

1yr

Commented

lady Gaga couldn't even walk in 12 inch heels. just sayin.

ch 31 OOPS!

It's Hard to Control My Naughty Wife!

Urban · jikanyotomare

RkArnold

1yr

Replied to RkArnold

hmm apparently the Margaret character is female now? so it's probably a pronoun issue. The names are still a problem for me. when every name in your story has to be odd or unusual it's distracting. I'm not saying you gotta call everyone John and Mary but in the real world some people have common names... at least the lead to character names are fairly normal.

ch 29 NO WAY

It's Hard to Control My Naughty Wife!

Urban · jikanyotomare

RkArnold

1yr

Commented

the names in this book are so weird. decidedly abnormal. Margaretha is a woman's name (derivative of Margaret) but all the pronouns are male... Lexus is a car brand.. it's like reading a story with a character named Toyota. And when someone really IS named Lexus it's a woman's. it's like the author picked names randomly from a baby name book that distract from the story. makes it hard for me to get into.

ch 29 NO WAY

It's Hard to Control My Naughty Wife!

Urban · jikanyotomare

RkArnold

1yr

Posted

I gotta admit having a hard time with this story. FL is stupid and annoying, not noble. It needs an editor. There's tons of stupid little errors and missing words and phrases. Some sections are disjointed like the court scene... "Wait, what? Who did that?" kind of scene confusion. There are some interesting plot components, like special abilities and a diversion from the "mate" trope common to most werewolf stories. The 2ML Channing reminds me of a goofy golden lab; most the secondary characters are caricatures, like the jail guard and his broken record threats... (yes, yes we get he's the bad guy, no need to bash us over the head with it). Sigh. It's decidedly a work in progress. Although an immature work, the author has potential. Many mistakes seem to be simply from a lack of an editor. When an author proofreads their own work they often overlook missing words or letters bc their brain knows what they intended, so it supplies it and they don't catch their own errors. Not trying to be harsh, giving critical feed back. I'm having difficulty developing an emotional connection with these characters. I dunno how far I will go with this book.

Alpha Princess's Possessive Mate

Fantasy · Eaagles_wings

RkArnold

1yr

Commented

so... you know when they bond... your cute boy birdie is gonna wanna eat you face... right? you DO know that ... right? if you didn't ... you do now 😜 30 years of bird experience speaking... from budgies to macaws. get ready. Ironically love birds are the most bloodthirsty when they bond. I don't know what your bird is...I wish you luck!

ch 78 Mo Han's Recording