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I won't say it's ineligible. Could it be improved? Yes. Is it a huge deal breaker? NO!

Is my grammar that bad? According to some feedback it is very difficult to read and breaks the flow of story.

Naruto: Shinobi SI

Naruto: Shinobi SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

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Yeah, that's Substitution. Though u named it right in chapter later. You might want to fix that here as well.

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Naruto: Shinobi SI

Naruto: Shinobi SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

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The three taught at the Academy r : 1) Clone Jutsu 2) Transformation Jutsu 3) SUBSTITUTION JUTSU BODY FLICKER is a technique most learn after being genin, mostly used by Chunin and above.

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Naruto: Shinobi SI

Naruto: Shinobi SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

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I really hope u change things from LAST TIME. I didn't really Enjoy It.

Well, if we're going to be childhood friends, I guess I'll have to make some changes to you, my little buddy. Don't get me wrong, it's not that I don't like you. It's just that you're going to become kind of boring in the future...

MHA: The Sentry

MHA: The Sentry

Anime & Comics · Satus_Null

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Avengers: Infinity War. She destroyed the mind stone that was keeping Vision Alive. But Thanks used the time stone to bring it back and the Snap still happened.

According to Edward's analysis, she was not the only one experiencing such a large fluctuation. A knife or bullet could probably kill the Scarlet Witch, but she destroyed the Mind Soul—a tier 10 item. She successfully destroyed the Darkhold across every timeline, which is a Tier 11 feat.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

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Yes actually. Sentry once gave a boy his powers just not at his level. Which isn't saying much, even 1/4th of Sentry's power is enough to be a Top Teir in MARVEL let alone in MHA.

I was sitting on a large rock, watching the rebuilt planet in front of me. It wasn't the first time I destroyed and rebuilt it, but I was still a little disappointed with my physical strength. It took about four blows to destroy this planet before rebuilding it again. I had hoped to do it with just one blow, but oh well...

MHA: The Sentry

MHA: The Sentry

Anime & Comics · Satus_Null

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No, but seriously for all his powers. AFO is also (very justly) arrogant. If he wants MCs power, he would be more likely to attack directly, because to him that's the easiest and quickest way. Not saying it's reckless what the MC is doing, just that their r two sides here.

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I'm devising a plan to awaken my "quirk" at school. I want to do it in an epic way, something that puts me on the map and shows the world what I'm capable of. The thought brings a smile to my face, leaving my mother a bit puzzled.

MHA: The Sentry

MHA: The Sentry

Anime & Comics · Satus_Null

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*Bachelor > Maester

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Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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*Bachelor => Maester

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Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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And it should not have. Though I am happy that u do acknowledge that later in the chapter. Just seems really out of character for Galladon after all the precautions and skull duggery he has done.

When Galladon entered the hall, together with his close guard Gustav, both Renly and Loras were quite surprised by their large frames and the weapons they carried with them. Galladon always kept his two swords by his side. He practiced the way of double swords since he was a child. Since then, he always kept two swords within arms reach of himself. 

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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Won't ever happen. It's considered the height of Rudeness and Defiance to have a weapon when meeting a Lord, especially a Leige Lord in THEIR OWN CASTLE. The guard can have a weapon and shield with armor, but Galladon himself CANNOT present himself to his Leige Lord In His House with Weapons on Him. Had he met them at the gates when arriving, or just shown them in the yard or when hunting, then fine. But at Dinner after Guest Rights? ABSOLUTELY NOT!!

When Galladon entered the hall, together with his close guard Gustav, both Renly and Loras were quite surprised by their large frames and the weapons they carried with them. Galladon always kept his two swords by his side. He practiced the way of double swords since he was a child. Since then, he always kept two swords within arms reach of himself. 

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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It did hurt them. They would smoke like a burning log, but No it didn't kill them. Short of the white oak stake through the heart and then enhanced werewolf venom, nothing can kill an Original Vampire.

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being an original in Westeros

being an original in Westeros

Movies · Kingoffrogs

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Or as they call it a Tourney

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Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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It keeps happening. At what age did he confess? 10 yrs. old or 8yrs. old ?

Therefore, he couldn't develop any product or service with an obvious advantage, even after his father granted him bigger rights after his confession at the age of 10.

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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*Free-Trade States => Free City States.

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Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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ten-year-old => *8yr old. / 8 namedays old.

After making the decision to no longer keep some of his secrets, the ten-year-old boy willingly explained how his auras worked and who currently profited from them. He further made some concessions to his father to allow him some future spots, if he could absolutely guarantee the loyalty of any personal, he wanted to involve in any of his auras.

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

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