Webnovel Author: Horizon209 - Novel Collection

She died bruh. Imagine spending almost 200 chapters reading about a character only to be killed while the mc just grabbed the sharingan. The mc is frankly a coward, a bit psychotic, and there's almost no character development since the mc is simply heartless. Also, the mc is talented as fuck to the point that he is too strong compared to his peers. Despite all that training, he didn't save her. The mc in reverend insanity is a psycho but at least he waits for his allies to betray him but this mc didn't even care. That is a sign of no moral and principles, a character that is too cold to the point that's annoying. This is my opinion so if you like this novel, more power to you! as for me..I'll head out

Thanks for the spoiler!

Oh, so he decided to just not save her. Drop. It doesn't make the mc cooler, just psychotic and someone who has no morals.

It will be a slow romance. Since I hate where the ml saves fl and the fl immediately blushed and falls in love. Also, don't worry. Catalinna would be more tolerable and gentle on some occasions.

Both of them are different. Cain's system is a more a naturing type, the type that gives the mc power and boosts permanently every time he achieves quests and milestones. Meanwhile, the primal sin strictly gives a power up temporarily in exchange for sanity. The primal sin is more powerful in a fight but the system is more powerful in gaining power over time.

A shameless review from the author itself. Just want to address this. There would be no harem. Despite using cultivation for its power system, The mc won't be able to mow down enemies that have a higher cultivation level than him. He would use his knowledge from reading the novel to gain every advantage he can to defeat stronger enemies. Additionally, the side characters, especially his allies won't just be a character whose use is to be shocked all the time whenever the mc does something relatively cool. They will grow stronger with the mc and are essential to the story and to the goals of the main character. Please comment if you see anything that should be criticized so I can improve this novel.

Just a simple question. When does the mc save his family? I thought he would immedietly leave the group and go towards the area where his family is located. He doesnt seem to be worried

Shameless move, i know but hey i'm the author. I'm quite new in writing a novel so i hope the readers can give some constructive criticism so i can improve the story