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This is a dumb take! MC wasnt strong enough to save mieko at that point and even still he tried to save her, bet u forgot that he tried it! And the only advantage he has, is knowing the future, why would he risk altering it!

Just terrible writing! Wrong grammers and sentence structure! Its as bad as MTL story. I felt like i was reading a diary book. I had no enjoyment reading this sht.

Starts off good but after like 100 chapters, the translation turns extremely trash! Unreadable! Straight up machine translation!

I have read that story up to chapter 70, but the story wasnt going anywhere, MCs character was very unlikeable and very weak no matter how much he trained. And the cherry on top is that the author has a tendency to always drop his projects which he has already done with this naruto story!

Dun bother with this novel! Its basically a porn story with a bit of sailing from time to time!

Well, lets start with the fact that MC got adopted rightaway by a retired shinobi with elite jounin strength, massive knowledge, political power and wealth! Then he can also access knowledge through hiruzen, who favours him heavily! He also gets to be taught by tsunade for three years outside of konoha! He then gets kakashi as his teacher instead of original story! He gets opportunities left and right shoved into his asshole, therefore he has several training arcs to get stronger! He never struggles anywhere cause u know at the end he will win and get stronger! Then he has his biggest supporter in the shadow not know yet, who started this whole ordeal by instructing him to be adopted! And theres the terrible story pacing! cant believe its been 270 chapters and the canon still hasnt started!

I am curious, so tell me what did i say that was incorrect?

I have read up to 270 chapters after putting my review here. Author has a good writing style and a stable world background. But my god is this novel so frustrating to read! It,s chapter 270 and upt to this point it has all been a big fat training arc! MC at this point 12 years old, hasnt graduated to chunin, has S rank strength, mastered 5 nature chakra by the age of 9 years old, mastered medic jutsu, is on the way to master sealing jutsu and the canon story has just now started! Such a ridiculous story development! And the MC always gets his powers handed to him on a plate, ally here & there to help him, inspirations when he needs it and no original jutsus he has created! And i stil cant figure out if the MC wants to be a hero, villain or anti-hero, his character all over the place!

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As u can clearly see, since there are no more relevant characters , author doesnt know how to progress his story and thats why he doesnt update as much as in the past. You guys can expect him to drop this soon.

This fanfiction used to good but it started to drop off the hill. The first arc, which basically consisted of only training and minimal contact with characters of dragon ball, was good. But then suddenly author starts killing off all dbz characters, and now author has no characters with whom MC can interact with. Now MC is klling anything he sees left and right while powering up.