I would my dude. Once we get to monster association arc. fufufu~🤭Also, thanks for reading!
In the wake of it all, I made a promise to myself: "No more attachments, no more kindness." With determination I steeled my heart, locking away the softness and positivity I held dear.
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It's done my dude. Do you have anymore suggestions?🤔 I wanted to improve my writing so I thank you for pointing that out.😌
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I see🤔 Thanks I'll add a bit more detail.
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Thanks🤔 I'll edit those now I guess. All of it.
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Still I would follow your example I guess it's my first time writing something so I'm bound to get something wrong, thanks for pointing it out!
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Have you ever called your mother mommy? Bro...does this mean you cringe when you call your mother mommy? it seems you hate your mother and that's not my problem bro.
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Also I like how you liked your own comments, it shows how much attention you want to have at your comments🤔
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Second death and meeting with a mysterious man.
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He doesn't have a mother figure in the past, bro have you even read the whole chapter 1? He was abused and threatened to be thrown out at the sea if they don't have any money that would feed their whole family🤔 I'm not even angry at you cuz you just pointed out something you hated and I really like how you told me about your perspective, thanks for letting me know😌
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I know that's why he wanted to perfect it for his son, also he didn't have any support from the government or any money. He is alone in making a serum like that so I don't know why you think he would get a fast regeneration by drinking a low tier enhancing serum🤔
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It's vital to the story.
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I see... I should deffnitely edit that thing out🤔
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Well, I don't know the specifics there so I just kinda thought that basic math could be hard for babies to even know what it is, also it's called memorization. He already knows how to count and his mother just makes him recount it.
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Alright dude, let's support each other.But for now I'm still sick so maybe in a few days I could return to writing again.🤒
ch 11 Just an update.
One Punch Man: Death Amends
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