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your not rushing, instead your dragging it out wit 0 visible progress

absolutelyt agree

another wasted chapter,

this was basically a waste of words, a full out right filler with no info dump or meaning

the blunder here is insane, not even 2 chapters or 3 days into the academy and u start spars ?,. there is no teaching happening, no context this is very very badly built up, kinda like a Chinese fiction piece, which I'm sorry to say is very very poorly designed

Chapters are awesome, but this is my greed talking, need more

first big mistake in the story a very glaring mistake, he is reborn as an infant, he reaches planet and suddenly he grows up ?

It was an awesome story, hoping to see it continued in a part two dragonball Super : Kai Raditz

Need Meridia to show up

stick multiple leaves to the body and do exercises, chakra flow to ain't train body and do a body stand or puch up on a finger with chakra as balancing point

one of the best ideas for chakra reserves is the 8 hidden gates, if u remember the dragon ball z episode where goku and gohan mastered super saiyan they could remain in that form indefinitely, mastery of the gates with near perfect chakra control should allow access to keep gate open and as it flows, mc's on reserves will increase, just a thought tho

why spear, either use a short sword, or katana or go pure martial arts, or use kunai, spear is too long and kinda goes against ninja

like in dragon ball z, where before the fight with cell, goku and gohan mastered super saiyan to the point it become a natural form for them, do the same to sasuke but with the gates, increase control and slowly allow it go till the with gate which is shown by lee

so ppl regardless of maybe naruto s class or fairytail s class or dxd satan. god , super devil which are just titels, the above classification shows their destructive and defense capabilities in their most truest and honest sense so a base line human can be considered a TIER 0 being , and weps can be used as well like the Hiroshima nuke can be classified as a TIER 3 weapon , as an example ultimate class beings in dxd can destroy cities or tank attacks of similar destruction so that can be classified as TIER 3 beings etc