“Immortal in a death game” is pretty good right now
Honestly the story is very basic, I don’t see the big appeal for this work. Specially when there are some other works that are new and better than this.
Read more of it, it definitely deserves a lot more love then it’s already gotten. Immortal aspect of this novel doesn’t affect how you feel about it.
God dammit I hope they get out together
"It's okay. You don't have to tell me anything now. You can… you can tell me after we get out of here, okay?"
Immortal In A Death Game
SF · Romeru
Loving the pace of character improvement
It doesn't matter. I… want to do this now.
Immortal In A Death Game
SF · Romeru
Hmmm… strong with this one, the Edge is. Potential to be a Lord, I see.
"Please… just go. You don't want this. You don't want… all this suffering."
Immortal In A Death Game
SF · Romeru
Very much a fan of the concept, they are pretty much the minions to hero’s, in moba terms.
"They're probably still on their way from the Spawn Point."
Immortal In A Death Game
SF · Romeru
Those are?
They were gods. And if they deemed anyone here to be breaking the silent rules they have set, they could come down at any time and smite anyone they wanted.
Immortal In A Death Game
SF · Romeru
Just from the first 5 chapters this leaning towards definite good read, though will it be a long one? Who knows maybe there is more after becoming a hero? As for the immortal aspect, I believe it’s still a worthy read, with its premise. Because of the author’s writing style being so gritty, it will still feel instense in combat even if he is immortal. They’ve done a good job with showing all characters emotions in events.
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original The World of Divine
My name was Jake, but that was before my reincarnation as the darkness. The story starts when I created a world where people of my old world and my new world could be one. The World of Divine a video game that changed the world as we know it. Now they call me Enzo The Creator. (Stoped writing this for now. I Will come back to it when I have my confidence in my writing.) (Authors Note: I will try to least make my chapters long enough for you to enjoy them. I have been reading for years so I have lots of ideas for this novel, but if I ever need someone's help I will look in comments, so please give me your ideas for the story as we go forward. Another fact is that this is a casual write so I am just trying to improve my writing skills.)10 Chs 58 お気に入り
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Expert Photography System (Dropped)
Le Ken started out his Friday going to an interview that did not go to well. Le Ken then got back in his car to go to his apartment, when Le Ken was driving he was trying to figuring out what he was going to do. As Le Ken was trying to figure out what to do he went into the wrong lane and got hit by a truck and barreled into a lake. [Expert Photography System Booting.] (Author's note: The story is going to be my first long story, I hope it will be good enough for you. Also make sure to review my story when you get the chance and if I made mistake on a chapter please comment and tell me, have a good day.)2 Chs 7 お気に入り
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The Romance of Two Slaves
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The romance of two slaves and how they escape form the evil in the world. (I'm going to start a new story like this with a more fleshed out story under the name Romance In Ancient Greece, hope you enjoy it.)6 Chs 10 お気に入り
Pretty interesting concept, is it fully original? God no, but it’s done to the best of the authors skill level. For my standards I can’t say I can continue reading, but for others give it a try.
Beast Evolution System: Devourer of Heaven
幻想 · Masheen