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Mandatory summons can't be called a plea for help.
The following year, as the pandemic raged on, Alex received a mandatory summons to serve on the pandemic front lines. It was a call to action, a plea for help that he couldn't ignore.
GoT: Giant Falcon
TV · Fanficstein
Isn't indispensable
Rhaegar eyed him with disdain. "Uncle, the kingdom has the might of all the major lords and knights. Your help is indispensable."
Game Of Thrones: I Became a Crown Prince For a Day
TV · MohaXx
Translation quality has become pretty hit and miss. There are some persistent mistakes that make me think translation team isn't going to bother doing better. I hope in the future there will be better translation and proofreading, but it is hard to enjoy in this state.
ch 109 Chapter 109: Manifestation of the Origin Tree! Ripping Space!
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Anime & Comics · Johanssen10
Why the hell are you calling Dou Wang cultivation champion?
ch 108 Chapter 108: Without Reaching Dou Wang, Forever Ants!
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Anime & Comics · Johanssen10
Awesome amazing astounding ancient and ancestral atrociously dark spell would be better if you were trying to make it even more ridiculous.
"While I am the same person, and you should not doubt when I say that: However, what I want to know is, what makes an Auror like you use that ancient ancestral dark spell?" Edwin asked, though he didn't care about what was happening in the background or not, because he could almost handle it if he faced it head-on.
Harry Potter: Lord Of Netori
Book&Literature · FakeDaoCultivator
So we have house elves that can brew newt level potions in this setting?
For some reason, he had always found the act of transferring one person's entire body into another's very unpleasant, after Edwin had taught him how to make Polyjuice Potion and he had witnessed his creation tested on Muggles.
Harry Potter: Lord Of Netori
Book&Literature · FakeDaoCultivator
You just babbled about the skull and the potion for many paragraphs without telling us what's the point of all this and why we should care. The skull medallion does what exactly? And what is the magicule nonsense?
ch 0 4 Chapter -4
Harry Potter: Lord Of Netori
Book&Literature · FakeDaoCultivator
I am honestly not sure what her name is. She is called Sai, Saya, Saa...
Unfortunately, she won't be the first or the last one like this. It's also good that the benefits are decently paid—enough to support a family of two people; otherwise, some chunin would be in a truly dire situation. But I swear, I'll restore Sai's ability to walk, even if I have to tear myself apart!
Red Nara
Anime & Comics · l_legolas
Maybe Ninjas wounded by jutsu are more likely to die instead of just getting injured and sent back home for treatment?
More precisely, the types of their injuries—almost sixty percent or more are delivered with injuries from hand-to-hand combat, like various fractures or weapon-related injuries. All the remaining falls on jutsu and the most severe cases of chakra depletion.
Red Nara
Anime & Comics · l_legolas
That's a big no no. I personally try to defend fellow doctors in front of the patients even if they had done something to be criticized. If it's a really important case I'll just call them and tell them personally that there may be trouble coming...
It's criticizing one doctor in front of another. Chen Cang wasn't naive; such flattery wasn't addictive for him, so he just smiled at any comments about who dressed wounds well or poorly.
When the Doctor Uses A Hack
Urban · Holding an inch ruler
I would love to gain this ability. I can't manage to diagnose anything other than the most obvious myocardial infarctus and arrhythmias.
Electrocardiogram Interpretation: Intermediate: 1490/2000]
When the Doctor Uses A Hack
Urban · Holding an inch ruler
And? I know what types of different cells and tissues brain is composed of. Brain is not muscle in any sense. I don't understand why you felt the need to elaborate. It's like you writing a multi paragraph long comment telling me why a watermelon isn't a type of dog. If the reader isn't incredibly uneducated it's all obvious. Anyone can open a neuroanatomy book and see the anatomical and hystological details of cranium and brain.
His heart pumped blood around his body! The strongest muscle in his body other than his brain!
Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
"From childhood till now, anyone who discovered my poison body feared me like a fierce tiger, avoiding me. Only you are willing to accept me."
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Anime & Comics · Johanssen10
"But it might not be the case for third-rank magic beasts. Challenging higher-level opponents is always the most difficult!"
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Anime & Comics · Johanssen10
Always a new name is used for the empire.
At worst, when the time came, he could strike first, take out the Wuguardian, and sever the Soul Palace's spies in the Jialan Empire.
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Anime & Comics · Johanssen10
The constant references to Warhammer40k is kind of lame. The author should just write a Wh40k story instead of fanboying on this story.
He walked to a place that looked like a medieval fighting ring. Two men were sparring with swords right now and some people were watching. He also took some time to watch and observe their fighting styles. The heavy armour and swords were clearly slowing them down. He had noticed that when sparring with Jorry back home. Robert personally didn't have a problem with the weight, but it was very bad to move inside it. He would have to find a better armour or create his own. Like the Astartes armour. But that would take a long time. The idea was not bad though, in his opinion. Food for thought.
Robert I Baratheon
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
The pointless purple prose is making the story hard to read. I hope it gets better in the future.
It was this very ability that alerted him to Emily's plight. Emily, a teenager whose life had been upended by the pandemic, was a patient under Alex's care. Her laughter had long since faded, replaced by a quiet despair that echoed through the empty corridors of the hospital. Alex noticed the subtle signs of her inner turmoil, the way her gaze lingered a moment too long on the sunset, or how her conversations always circled back to farewells.
GoT: Giant Falcon
TV · Fanficstein