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Tbh its not that clear, you made it seem like shes in love with Robert but she still fooled around with Jaime and hopes to marry him. She seems erratic and awkward.
I tried to include the 'torn feelings' of Cersei. I hope it was alright. I already have things planned out and am interested to see what others think, when it happens.
Robert I Baratheon
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
Wouldnt mind a harem
I awoke the next morning to both Milim and Shuna curled up against me, Shuna snuggling into my breasts as Milim hugged my abdomen from behind, her physical form making for an odd sensation near my ass cheeks. I ignored the odd position of Milim however and remembered the fun and enjoyment both Shuna and Milim had had last night.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
Whats this weird emphasis on the old man storyline
ch 105 Chapter 105: Alastor 'Mad-Eye' Moody
I became Voldemort
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
As long as the diaglogue is appropriate and theres no “dude” or “nah” or “bro”
If you don't like this, I can go back to writing it my way. It's more work this way, anyway. Again, those are my words and my story but just a bit revised to feel like the ASOIAF books.
Robert I Baratheon
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
Yes, I realized that its the 3rd mizukage in the story right now
ch 28 Chapter 28: A Ninjato? Just trash!
Naruto: Hidden Mist's Great Blacksmith
Anime & Comics · lookar
My mistake, i take it back
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MHA: Izuku Legacy
Anime & Comics · XaviValentine
I dont think Maeve can fly
As a fan of F1, the car would not go fast at all if there was another person weighing it down. Theyre built to minimize weight so speed is maximized.
It was very awesome and curious being above a formula one car when it was racing, made it seem like I was third person driving in real life.
Reality Bender System, Marvel
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
Ikr these chinese novels always overdo it
ch 15 Chapter 15
Starting as a Class Five Mutant
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
Do a poll instead of thinking everyone wants a harem
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MHA: Izuku Legacy
Anime & Comics · XaviValentine
Just realized a glaring plothole, Madara would have to remove the 3 tails without killing the mizukage then put it back if he wants obito, since itachi and juzo fought him after they joined the akatsuki
ch 28 Chapter 28: A Ninjato? Just trash!
Naruto: Hidden Mist's Great Blacksmith
Anime & Comics · lookar
This is the most interesting, the others just seem like wish fulfillment
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I agree, do it organic
The difference is that if I do it now there will be spoilers as to where I want to take the story, and it might not feel as natural seeing them now as to seeing them later. That's why it's readers' choice.
Fairy Tail: Swallow the Fire
Anime & Comics · SMKenward
That was a disappointing way to show of Lyssa’s change after a major event because now it seems like shes never going to go through any meaningful growth and will always be weak. I understand that she was holding back but this was the wrong time for that storywise
ch 31 29. She-Devil vs. Devil Slayer
Fairy Tail: Swallow the Fire
Anime & Comics · SMKenward
Noo that cliffhanger from the previous chap is even worse now
(Tony Stark POV)
Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
Thanks for the chapter, cant wait for the next.
ch 0 8 A Feeling of Freedom
Attack on Titan: A Warrior of Devils
Anime & Comics · Drinnor
Good, didnt like that snake Gin anyway.
ch 14 Chapter 14
One Piece: Struggle of the Weak [Reboot]
Anime & Comics · BravoBuds