It's increasingly difficult for WN to find good stories, don't get me wrong, the story had an interesting permission, a world with many possibilities, but in my point of view poorly executed. with an MC who doesn't have a brain that leaves the instincts of their race decide their destiny. as for the “Heroines” it's okay because they are brainwashed so it doesn't matter much, are treated like a piece of meat with no value to history. another thing I noticed was that the MC's personality reflects that of the author, and that's not a good thing here, because what? Just read the chapter comments and you will come to the same conclusion. I don't know other works by the author, but if it's similar to these I have no interest in knowing other works, unfortunately. Summary, A world with great possibilities and a good but misused permission and an arrogant author who does not accept criticism and does not seek to improve.
really frustrating, every "100 chapters" a new story, and now one with 2 MC... That's for the talk of the gods there.
It's very frustrating that MAC only weighs down what it could do and in the end it doesn't do anything either in the other reality or in this one until it changes again. For a while now he has an air of arrogance and superiority but he is at the bottom of the rock bottom in terms of power. [After all, he doesn't commit to gaining exp, and has practically lost all his skills.
many questionable decisions in my opinion. the main one, I think that even though she was his mother, she practically left him to die if she didn't have enough power, if an attack hit a normal person it would at least break every bone in his body, and he patted everyone on the back as if nothing had happened.
I only know Skype, no interaction in NPC history. kkkkkkkk
I just have a question about something that has been bothering me for a long time, about how other people without any system can evolve so quickly. there was an evolution from [F] to [E] that would take 2 months, if you don't focus on the power of the MC, and it took about 7 months at most and there are already many [A] and even some [S] that haven't appeared yet , I don't think it makes much sense in relation to the evolution time. this in relation to humans. Because in relation to zombies, I think it is acceptable that they have a much faster rate of evolution, especially because there are millions of them acting out of instinct to evolve.
Another thing would also be a way to merge titles, or be able to use more than 1, since it is not even human anymore, now I think that certain restrictions would be useless.
taking into account that it has to reach at least level 100 from what I read previously somewhere. A good idea would be to put the Exp in % from 0 to 100% per level, and distributing like a zombie [A] would give 0.10%, a zombie [B] 0.0010 and so on, being more or less like this [ 0.010% of 100%].
I don't even know what to say about this development. ugh!!
I think the worst thing is the number of chapters, it takes over 1 week which ends up taking the focus away from the previous chapters, all of Lucas' drama seems like it was 400 chapters because the releases were so slow. I think about 2 or 3 a week would be a good rhythm, so as not to lose quality and keep the public interested. My opinion only.
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Fantasy · SinfulQueen