Webnovel Author: 1_0Rawkth1_0 - Fanfic Collection

Overall a good novel, I can't find any issues with it, the story's compelling, and I'm interested in what will happen next. It's still early into the novel but it seems to be on its way to success as long as the quality doesn't drop.

It's not bad a few mistakes here and there, but it's well written, the plot isn't bad, and the unique plot device the MC was given seems interesting though it hasn't been fully explored yet, honestly it's only issue is that it likes chapters and the chapters themselves feel slightly short but not enough to were it's a glaring issue.

Its's just an overall good read (don't care about the r18 scenes though) it isn't a complicated read and the MC's previous life is pretty much none existent in the early chapters (40~60)

Overall the story is great, the plot is interesting, the MC isn't a copy & pace, and it has the potential to grow. There are also very few mistakes in the author's grammar overall I'd recommend this to someone else, I think it just needs some time to get better. -rawkth

This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)