バッジ 4
Moments 36
Poor choice of words
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Reincarnated With A Summoning System
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Please develop in what way I may be wrong, I understand that it's possible for my statement to not be true, but I'd at least like to know more about your stance on my aforementioned paragraph.
Noah watched her leave until she was out of his sight. He was always that kind of person: if someone came to talk to him without aggression or ill will, he would be polite to them. It was like an old saying that he once heard: "Give me a grain of good rice and I will give you a handful in the future, but give me a grain of bad rice and I will give you a bucketful in the future." Basically he wouldn't be arrogant or treat anyone badly for no reason, but if the person treated him poorly, he would lose all decorum with that person.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
I haven’t read further yet, but my guess is that he will find a space relic or he will develop it himself, then have both time and space.
[Host already has a special pathway; the All-father's space inheritance is a special pathway that has the time authority.]
My Space-Time System
Fantasy · xImpulse
the author just described a character, what are you on about dude?
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My Space-Time System
Fantasy · xImpulse
well, it’s kinda new to not have a protagonist that hides every of his skills until revealing them thousands of chapter later. but this isn’t so bad if you think about it. (hoping that it actually doesn’t turn bad)
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Master of none
Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
So for your first question my best guess would be that it doesn’t see him as the “devil” we know of but sort of like a “predator” eyeing it’s prey with a smile, which the goblin can consider as the “devil” and most if not all creature has the instinct to identify and flee if something is a potential danger for them. For your second question I don’t remember the author mentioning that they are creature of low intelligence, a bit earlier in this chapter the goblins were said to speak and even shout curse words in their language, which means that they are intelligent enough to assign words to objects. They do have an understand about the world around them, they made huts, some kind of village and even organize groups of goblins to patrol the fortress. In conclusion they must have also enough intelligence to attribute a title to higher powers. I’m guessing you thought that these were your typical dumb goblin (which is something that can happen to inexperienced readers) but do remeber that every fiction is not the same. If i’m wrong anywhere feel free to correct me.
One of the goblins, who was holding a blowgun in his hand, looked away in fright and saw a strange human coming out of a bush with a strange flame dancing in his hand. For the little goblin, the appearance of that strange human itself was not at all threatening, but added to the flame that floated in his hand and the small sadistic smile that the human had on his face, the only word that crossed the small goblin's mind was... Devil.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
shit, i teared up in this chapter
ch 30 Chapter 30: GoodBye Xiao Ma
Tales Of The World Devouring Serpent
Eastern · lil_poop_pug
fang yun leaving xiao ma makes me freaking sad, shit
Xiao ma obviously didn't find the anomaly of Fang Yun.
Tales Of The World Devouring Serpent
Eastern · lil_poop_pug
Indeed, it adds a bit of life in the story compared to the classic side character that is obsessed with trying to make things hard for the protagonist.
'Maybe I should just put this aside and go on with my life...' The woman thought as she remembered the cold look she received from Noah, quite different from the frightened look he kept on his face the first time she broke into a Fortress with him.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
Ah yes, considering pride in a life and death situation, to probably leave your sister to death too, very logical. Dude he is the “descendant” of Lucifer, not Lucifer. He may have some similarities in his personality but he is a different person. And without blessing what do you expect him to do? Logically fight and tactically retreat or fight while considering pride and having a chance to get destroyed by some random E rank monsters... Sometime people criticize/comment on stories without using their brains, think before you type shit.
As Noah did not have a real Blessing for the first 4 years of his being Blessed, he was practically forced to learn to fight with knives and swords to defend himself. So after he received the [Hell Flames] ability, he stopped being a warrior/assassin and became something like a Magic Assassin. Since he always had a preference for shorter blades and faster logical reasoning, Noah always used this to ambush or escape with great agility in his invasions.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
In my opinion this paragraph was okay, even necessary. We are still at the “beginning” of the story and the author is still building our main character. He (the protagonist) was shown to speak arrogantly and with an insulting behavior towards the people that his uncle sent, so people that treated him and his family badly, now the author reveals us another aspect of our protagonist, a more calm and respectful side of him that he shows only with people that aren’t ill willed towards him. The author here writes it with a proverb so people aren’t confused or to make the story flow better. Hope what I wrote is readable, i’m not a native english speaker so it may seem weird but it should still be understandable.
Noah watched her leave until she was out of his sight. He was always that kind of person: if someone came to talk to him without aggression or ill will, he would be polite to them. It was like an old saying that he once heard: "Give me a grain of good rice and I will give you a handful in the future, but give me a grain of bad rice and I will give you a bucketful in the future." Basically he wouldn't be arrogant or treat anyone badly for no reason, but if the person treated him poorly, he would lose all decorum with that person.
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
She was worried about his safety, and also that his father probably had teached him magic without her knowing.
His mom bought the explanation and then hugged him once again. "My baby is so smart! Who would have thought that you would be able to learn magic on your own? That's incredible." She praised him and then devoted her spare time to make sure that he practised magic safely.
The Legendary F Rank
Fantasy · Zero_Things
Look at the last paragraph, he’s on the humans side. (i’m still not totally sure but i’m guessing he is)
[During the next 4 years, you must fight with everything you have against the fortresses.]
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye
That’s true, it’s definitely better to give kids more motivation than to make them feel inferior and insignificant. Motivation can really help a lot (speaking from experience).
In fact, because of how dim the third small orb was, Kalo should have been considered a level 2 Earth Element User. But the Tribe elders always added a level as long as the next small orb was lit even a little bit. That was to help the kids to have more confidence in their abilities. Even though it was a lie, it was a good one.
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan
Is this foreshadowing a war that is going to happen later on when both Rean and Roan are old enough to take part? If it is so, then that's great lol.
"But we can't do that now. If we attack straight away after the Nari Tribe allied with them, it would be the same a trampling on their pride. It would just cause a bigger war where both sides would suffer. Those new talents are all kids at the moment. Before they are at least 25+ years old, they won't be any problem for our Tribe. After all, unless they have a Green Aptitude Level or higher, those kids will at most reach the initial stages of the Energy Gathering Realm during this time."
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan
We’re reading a fiction novel about cultivation and what-not, why would we care about insignificant meager aliens.
"Our Universe doesn't have this Spiritual Energy thing. That much I can guarantee you. So no race that I know had ever done something like cultivation before. All their evolution, humans included, happened through tens of thousands of generations and an absurd amount of time. The way that they can change their bodies' structure with this Body Transformation Realm is simply inconceivable back there."
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan
Someone can fairly easily put up a face in front of the media, and in a world like this with Heros everywhere it must be even easier.
There was a question on Alex's mind as he followed the woman. Everyone else there was in uniform, but the woman seemed to wear what she liked. 'She must be a hero, but again to have such authority over these military men, she must be a famous one, at least S rank… Which makes no sense, There aren't much S ranks in the world and I've researched them all but… I've never seen her before. It's like she popped out of nowhere. Does this mean that she is hidden by the government?' Alex was confused. He, being a super fan of heroes, knew all the S rank heroes but never saw her before. It was a surprise for him.
Hero System! Transported to Another World
Fantasy · Ripcorez
same, just sit down, watch my cute little golems practicing genocide on these meager monsters while playing a real-time strategy game. ah, what a life that would be.
Reincarnated With A Summoning System
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku