I'm just trying my feet at writing my own story, and using what I learn. I'm trying to make my mark and tell the story that's in my mind.
Man. Author this story is really good. I love your attention to detail and how you portray each character. I hope you keep going, and never stop.
Fantasy · Serial_seresposa
I like what you're doing author. The flow of the story is amazing and the plot is really enticing. I look forward to seeing what else you accomplish and I hope you never stop!
Fantasy · amber0613
Man Author. This was my first time reading a military book and I'm digging it. The first chapter is long; however that works for the set up and what you are trying to establish. Also the setting was really good, and I felt as if I could imagine the whole situation playing out. Outside of a few grammar errors or so, this story is really good. I recommend anyone that love stories like these to check it out. Author I wish you the best of luck, and you continue to do such amazing things with this story.
War · Tropic_Panda
From what I'm reading, it's really good. The pacing is nice and smooth. The conflict the main character is in is very interesting. I really like what you are writing and I hope you continue to do great things.
Urban · _Sha
The story was good. The main character is interesting, and the plot is like a breath of fresh air. I would recommend everyone check out this story.
この本は削除されました。
So far, I am interested to see where this goes. ( Sorry about that was trying to delete the second comment or mine😅)
ch 0 1 The Fall
Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
Sure. I don't mind at all.
Fantasy · Timothy_Hogan
Hey Bro. Thank you. That means a lot. Trust me we are only beginning.
ポルノコンテンツ 憎悪またはいじめ 個人情報の公開 暴力 スパム その他
Man. Author this story is really good. I love your attention to detail and how you portray each character. I hope you keep going, and never stop.
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy · Serial_seresposa