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ew bro the way mc handled his fiance and the phenex family is so fucking frustrating. iirc lord phenex sent mc to the future or something and his fiance married lord phenex instantly after his disappearance. after fucking over lord phenex getting his title stripped and other shit, mc just let his ex-fiance live with him as he is engaged to his ex-fiance's daughter who is ravel btw, he could have just told them to pay him and fuck off, but the author said no and made mc have some weird and pathetic relationship with the phenex family . it feels like some NTR hentai situation when the ex-fiance asked to stay with him after having 4 kids and asking for forgiveness. sorry for wall of text but I'm so fucking frustrated by it

the drama with Abby and ed went on for far too long just for the author to have a shit cliche conclusion to said drama. I don't remember when they broke up but as of ch 141, I'm assuming the abby drama is done. But I don't feel like reading this, just in case some more stretched-out irritating drama is added again

The author doesn't know how to write scenes when it's supposed to be tense, it isn't, etc. I almost forgot there was a system in this novel and the purpose of said system has the fan-favorite sealed effect, rank 1 mage sealed, charisma 7 sealed Started off well but went downhill fast and there isn't a reason to mention the intelligence of the characters including the mc after all the character can only have the same intelligence as the author

just read chapter12 demi-god btw, made me lose brain cells. FYI possible jessica pairing

Author doesn't understand how new order works 1. You can only have 2 orders as your limit no matter what. 2. Requirement to using a order is to both touch the object and say it's name . On a living target with a sense of self the user target identity has to align with their own .you can't just go up to nel and say I order nelliel to drop dead since she has amnesia. 3. If the user says they want to have white hair with one order and red eyes with the other you can longer impose another order untill one is cancelled hence returning the hair or eye color back to it's original color . No new order is not omnipotent, no order can be permanent without it using a slot. there is limit to what it can do you can't ask for infinite reiastu . Sorry for the wall of text but I haven't slept and don't feel like doing proper writing

The story would be amazing if the supernatural part didn't exist, the fights in his original world come out as lame when you know he fought Garfiel Tinsel and has been to re:zero. The mc is meh feels like he takes 2 steps forward but takes 2 steps back with every development. and the plot well just like other similar fan-fics is nowhere to be seen the witting is good though,