prepare for trouble, and make it double -team rocket maybe
[Achievement: Double Trouble. See two pairs of chest at the same time. +100 Experience, + 1 Perception]
Fantasy · Dirk_Grey
I usually only read books with a lot of action, fights and kame hame ha's, and I thought this one was also about that, but it caught me by surprise 😂😂😂, the book is good and I liked it. Waiting for more chapters, gimme more.
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Loved the story. Everything happening in the mc's life was explained beautifully. I just loved listing to mc's thoughts all the time lol but overall this story has a lot of potential and it is going in the right direction.
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Maybe add a comma in the last line,
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Fantasy · CREATIVE_SPACE
Point of view switch is very sudden, just mention who is talkning before changing point of view
I liked the novel, you can tell the author is experienced, not doing the beginner mistakes. As the story is in very early stages, I can only comment on the plot, which is very nice, both characters are well thought of, with strong personalities. The thing I am most excited to find out is who will fall in love first. I am looking forward to get my answer.
Break The Devil’s Heart
Fantasy · AngelLily