Webnovel Author: Lord_Streak - Novel Collection

This is a good example of what happens when you don't really pay attention to a story. 1) Rui doesn't have immortality and even if the Beggar Sage gave it to him, he would do so at **the end of his natural lifespan.** This is stated in the story. 2) The reason Rui doesn't want to become Emperor is because being Emperor takes away from being a Martial Artist. This has nothing to do with time. You cannot do two things simultaneously. He has no political ambition. Only Martial ambition. 3) It was stated in chapter 1977 (6 days ago) that training in the manifold is worse than training outside. He has more time but zero adversity which means zero growth in adaptive evolution.No adversity = no breakthrough. 4) The Divine Doctor is immortal. What part of that did you miss? I appreciate that you bought privilege, but what is the point of buying privilege if you don't read?

Volume would expand because of the liquified air absorbing the necessary enthalpy of vaporization from the air.

I was rude as well amd am sorry for that. Hope you enjoy the story to the very end. :)

See, this is constructive criticism. And I deeply appreciate that. I really do. You don't have to be too formal, I just didn't like the tone of the original comment. I will keep this in mind and see if I can tinker around to avoid inadvertently belittling readers. I hate to know that some readers have felt this way and it was never my intention. Thanks.

These kinds of comments spoil what is otherwise a pleasant experience for me. In general, I like objective criticisms regarding logical consistency and narrative coherence. I work hard to maintain them in this story. Whenever my readers point them out, I quickly fix them. But 'angels beasts :/' and 'less YAPPING' just comes off as immature petulance that stems from impatience to me, personally. It's been a mere two days since the Mellow arc started. If you're too impatient to enjoy the ride calmly then I would rather such readers save their money and stop reading, with all due respect. I don't mind earning less if it means having higher reader-author compatibility. I would rather earn less money if it means having more enjoyable fan interactions.

He didn't get lucky.

First of all, this is an entirely criticism altogether. Secondly, yes, Kane is an idiot compared to Rui. So yes, when Rui makes inferences/deductions through twenty or thirty layers of inductive or deductive propositional logic, he needs to explain each layer of logic to Kane step by step. It's also literally important to the decisions that will impact the rest of the story.

If you want an MC who engages in mindless action without rigorous, complex, and elaborate thought process behind decisions, stop reading right now. All information, every word uttered, is relevant to the main storyline. If you lack patience for even this much, then that is, again, your shortcoming, not this story's.

Read the Bible's description of them. They're monsters. Calling them beasts is actually defamation against beasts.

What do you mean? This is the right chapter.

Thank you for the gift! I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for your continued support and hope you enjoy the rest of the novel.

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule