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I'm surprised she would want to go back to the rat Clan where they treat females as baby making machines and if they're not good enough they put them in a cave and have them just be available for random men. it's a horrible system

you mean he had his EYE on her.. ha ha ha ha

third time she changed the main character's name to Lisa and one of the times she's the name Sam and Lisa in the same sentence. therefore I will not continue this book past the promotion I'm getting points for because this book was released over two years ago and the author never bothered to go back and fix the mistakes making them a bad author

puppy!! not pappy... such an unfortunate word error

seat was reserved for her not preserved

why exactly would you tell her friend she's going to work for the mafia. saying that the mafia is an undercover terrorist group.

maybe Authors Math is worse than mine!!

okay I spoke too soon but it was such a noticeable possible mistake to have it clarified a few paragraphs later. sorry for that jump the gun

Author.. a pair of wings are 2 wings. pair=2. writing 2 pairs of wings would mean the person has 4 wings.

your welcome. it is a good story!!

tons of misspelled words here I guess they haven't had their English edit done completely yet luckily the misspelled words do not affect the story badly but there are noticeable. but it is a good story so far

seems weird that he is nervous about gold and silver coins which are normal currency but he'll take an unidentified strange dark brown saliva from a dragon and try to sell it

Viola is quite an unobservant and clueless person for being an alpha. I hope her character grows

ha ha I spoke too soon!!

thank you for acknowledging. that makes you a very thoughtful author that's going to do very well

first or clothes that she was put in were barely enough for her but now later in the chapter they're oversized

not yet..:-)

it's sad that we don't have any descriptions of what either of them look like

ancestor master dragon repair? what does repair mean in the sentence?

the venue only seats 1,000. this was mentioned in an earlier chapter. so there cannot be thousands there although they could be lining the walls and the highway