Webnovel Author: GaZe_Zero - Fanfic Collection

I’m being honest the writing is bad, and as much as I want to be nice about it I can’t. There’s no plot, things just randomly happen, and there’s no build up to anything. The idea itself is good and can be improved upon, but tbh this needs some grammatical checks and fixing.

Solid 4 star, it’s good and I like the idea but there’s some issues with going into details and character interactions. Still good, just can use some more details and sprucing up with dialogue.

I got one in the works but won’t be out for a month cuz I’m busy fin up college, will be updating fanfic and this account then

Tbh I clicked on this as I like the character and idea, especially because it’s yuri. Main issue is that it’s just not my cup of tea as it’s a heavy system fic with massive progression. It’s not bad, and a lot of people will enjoy it, but I feel like it progresses way too quickly. The mc is getting really OP powers like no tomorrow, where instead there should be some chapters of her just building her current powers. The system is called street level system, but a lot of the people are super OP in their own rights. It’s good just too fast and OP for me.

I’m being honest it’s a great idea, and authors doing great for starting out. Issue is that this just completely neither fits SCP or the Lich. Mc is freely letting the foundation nerf him, and the foundation is acting nothing like it would. The Mc is too naive and doesn’t fit the Lich persona either, I feel like it would’ve been better to have the actual lich of an evil mc fill the role. For the author you gotta remember the Lich persona when writing, and that SCP is prob the most cruel gulag ever. If they found the Lich they would lock him up until the sun blows up, and would never let any reality bender live either.