mayathe4th - Profile

I really love this. if anything I am a little sad it is over but I really liked it. and I like that it isn't your standard superhero story . overall a really good read!

I like the overall idea and story, but I think it needs help from a really dedicated proofreader. the grammar mistakes spoil the story a lot. there are multiple mistakes in every chapter. I don't know if it gets better in the later chapters, I only read the first 30 or so.

the spelling and grammar mistakes are too much for me. it makes it hard to understand and I got stuck often. many scenes were to hasty, others were drawn out endlessly (and needlessly). a good editor would really help the book. I don't know about the ending, I didn't reach it.

I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...