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I read this fic on the Chinese site almost up to chapter 400 and I can say that it is definitely not bad. This is different from regular fics in that it doesn't lick tan san or the hall of spirits. The main character is a time traveler who ended up in the body of Tang San. (not the original hero) He is not an ungrateful bastard or a master of double standards, but scientists from the 21st century. The story is quite good, but after 350 chapters it gets too attached to relationships and women and the main meaning gradually fades away. What also makes this novel interesting is that there are other time travelers who hate him, I don’t know that he is not the original hero. Overall, not bad. I strongly advise you to read the original text up to chapter 300 if you can handle Google translation. 8/10

The idea is good, but the story is boring. There is no tension or adventure. There is no spirit of exploration and adventurism. Everything is presented on a silver platter to the main character. He just touches but there is no motivation for him. Women are also boring and like stereotypes. in ~10 days he reached the strength of those who trained for decades, which is why the line between levels is blurred. I would understand if he slowly mastered magic and skills, but they are simply inherited. Boring and dry

Hell, that's not how it works. characteristics cannot increase indefinitely. 10 mile units for the first level and 10 units for the second are not the same thing. I thought it would stop at 1499 or 1999 but instead it continues to accumulate stats. It's very banal and boring. Where are the quality improvements??? And magic is also useless in most cases. you're just filling chapters with a ton of useless information and increasing the length of the text. How much water do you still need? Aren't spells like "evolution" better? fireball -> fire arrow -> rain of arrows -> meteorite, etc. and here are boring spells. Or the gradual mastery of the elements, for example fire, water, wind, earth, metal, wood, lightning, light, darkness. The system itself has not been disclosed. The author wants to portray his character as chaotic, but he's just a self-righteous idiot. Orario is a chaotic place. The difference between levels cannot be overcome with two spells. Characteristics shouldn't work like that. Gods demand respect for themselves even if they walk among people.

at first it was quite interesting but after 100 chapters I began to realize that I was reading MTL a Chinese novel but with Japanese names. Absolutely everything is looped. Everything the main character does is just copies of old games. No tension. As if there are no smart people in the world. He simply recreates games from our world and that's it. then buys up Companies or shares and contacts his company. In general, this is just a retelling of the events of 1990-2000, but if there was KiShin. The main character is boring. Absolutely nothing new. They just say from time to time how cool he is and that’s all. Typical Chinese MC.

An excellent novel for lovers of logical cultivators. Without cliches and plot armor. The main character is quite smart and rational but not insensitive. I would really like to see how MK will come up with techniques and skills based on his cheat panel. I really liked it. I hope the author doesn't abandon the book. English is not my native language

Wow, that was really cool. I have read all the currently available chapters and I can say that this is a really good work. The good one is a smart protagonist. No cliches. The logic of what is happening. Sustainable development of strength and personality. I hope the author will release chapters more often and the story will not stop. And I really hope it doesn't turn into a harem of Pokemon. Otherwise I really like it 9.5/10 (English is not my native language)

I read almost all books from third-party sites or through a browser. And 0.2 hours is in the application

The quality of the novel in the first ten chapters is very different from everything that follows. From the very beginning, it was interesting to observe the dark setting and struggle, psychology and will to live. And then, after 50+ chapters, the entrance exam for a hundred chapters dragged on for a long time, and the book itself plunged into a children’s adventure. The book has lost its shine for me. the number of words became very small. The creation system does not stand out in any way. The main character who has trained since childhood is no better than ordinary spoiled children of aristocrats. It's a pity. English is not my native language

another romance with a spineless protagonist who thinks only of his dick. The characters are like Pokemon. There is no plot development. Mc has sperm instead of brains. I do not recommend to anyone. English is not my native language

another stupid teen romance with cum instead of brains. There is no plot, full of cliches, all the characters are made of shit. I do not recommend to anyone

good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit...........

this is a very good fanfiction. The plot is interesting and the main character is not a beta male. I hope that some Chinese clichés and pretending will not be adapted for an English-speaking audience. It would be nice if the plot moved logically and not too slowly. After all, Chinese writers abuse a lot of unnecessary information. And so everything is fine. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language

Everything was fine until chapter 39. There are too many bots in the reviews How do you annoy me you stupid bastard. to create a good foundation you need to use good technique from scratch. Because of some competition to sacrifice the future. What a fool you are. Intelligence at the level of secondary characters. Cannon fodder.

I had hopes for this but they did not come true. too disappointing. Even after 100 chapters, the protagonist has level 1 cultivation. 90% of the text is useless crap. The main character is naive and stupid. You can not talk about racism and Nazism at all. Another garbage at the level CHINA is the best country and the rest of the countries are bad. I do not advise. (English is not my native language)

It takes a lot of hard work to write shit like this. I will ignore grammar and content issues. But the plot is the most banal. Starting from the very beginning, where did the terrorists come from in the forest? Why are all the characters stupid? Why do daughters/grandchildren of powerful people have so little protection. Why are all of them "accidentally" saved by the protagonist. The feeling that they are made of cardboard and they painted faces. No character development. The plot armor and the power of the plot is all this novel has. The main characters are like Pokemon. The actions of the protagonist are arrogant and irrational. For example, in chapter 35, the guards were fired just like that, although they were just doing their job. The whole plot is filled with the words "the main character is right and the rest who disagree with him are villains." This shitty novel even continues to be released to this day and is a cash cow. (English is not my native language) This book for schoolchildren 12-16 years old with sperm toxicity who have just entered puberty.