Toseeb_Qais

14d

Commented

His name is Tom Riddle but when called he was last because his last name started with a Y???

ch 15 Chapter 15: Azkaban!

The Day of the Draw at Hogwarts

Book&Literature · young_sunlight

Toseeb_Qais

23d

Commented

Why is he weaker after previously stating he could destroy the solar system. It would be like captain America beating up Odin.

ch 78 Chapter 72 - Baldur and Hulk Vs Abomination

Baldur Odinson: God of Light

Movies · Lonely_Translator

Toseeb_Qais

2mth

Posted

The tag states system does that come later on?

Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord

Anime & Comics · Scaramousse

Toseeb_Qais

4mth

Commented

For the system can you use brackets or some kind of space, because at this point I get confused because I am reading the system instead of action.

ch 0 3 Chapter 3

A Gamer in Remnant & Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Nemo_2837

Toseeb_Qais

5mth

Posted

The tag states there is a system but there has been no evidence of this yet.

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

Toseeb_Qais

6mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter just. I just wish it was longer

ch 21 The Greengrass Heiress!

Harry Potter: Ero World

Book&Literature · light_novel_addict

Toseeb_Qais

7mth

Posted

Why are people in DXD fanfics always joining Rias at this point it’s overused and stale.

この本は削除されました。

Toseeb_Qais

8mth

Commented

I like the story but I feel as it is going to slow. I don’t mind a build up but I would like for at least some speed ups or a small timeskip.

ch 23 Synchronization

ROB's Lottery Wheel

Anime & Comics · Dragon15681

Toseeb_Qais

8mth

Commented

Re write you rushed the power level. Should have given him a martial artist template first then another template when Frieza arrives corresponding to the power level.

この本は削除されました。

Toseeb_Qais

8mth

Posted

I am confused the tag stated a system but there is no introduction of it?

Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord

Anime & Comics · Scaramousse

Toseeb_Qais

9mth

Posted

Nope sorry this makes no more sense. Dropping it.

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

TV · REALMSINUS

Toseeb_Qais

9mth

Commented

I don’t mind Luna but the fanfics I have rad where she seems to know of other world powers is a bit insane he is given a power that influences everything yet gets caught by a student.

ch 11 10: Professoring

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Book&Literature · Daddy

Toseeb_Qais

10mth

Commented

Isn’t Homelander a budget superman?

"I can do whatever I want!" (T/N: Bro became budget Homelander)

I, Superman's Younger Brother, got the Thanos Template

Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69

Toseeb_Qais

10mth

Commented

Saw this on ff.net years ago was never finished. Let’s hope there are more than 45 chapters. Also can you put the skills or the gamer parts in brackets or in Bold please. Makes it easier to read.

ch 0 5 Chapter 2

Harry Potter System Gamer

Movies · William777

Toseeb_Qais

10mth

Commented

Keep it up👍👍

ch 41 Ch-41 He is equal to Fourth gate.

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Toseeb_Qais

10mth

Replied to TrafalgarDwaterLaw

Orochimaru got beat and killed so much times and still turned up like he just got out the shower.

If these powerhouses can be recruited, in this era of the Ninja World where there are no Sage of Six Paths level powerhouses, who can their opponents be?

Naruto Building an Army

Anime & Comics · Kanekikun125

Toseeb_Qais

10mth

Commented

Is Yuno still part elf like the anime or just a normal human with good power?

ch 26 A Hidden Siscon

Lioness Cub

Anime & Comics · SALTANDPEPPER_1

Toseeb_Qais

11mth

Commented

You need to fix the writing. The speech marks disappear from time or they are not there at all. Certain phrases or words are re-repeated in the same paragraphs.

ch 34 Chapter 34