One thing i have noticed in the past few chapters is that the writing quality has gotten a bit too good and not in a good way. The narration does not fit the theme of jujutsu kaisen anymore and the dialogues have gotten a bit too sophisticated and do not match the personalities of the characters. And there is also the fact that all of these characters are starting to sound the same. Sometimes i am unable to keep up with the story because the dialogues have become too complicated for my understanding. All of this along with a couple of other things has made the reading experience considerably worse the past few chapters even though the writing is technically of higher quality.
ch 55 Chapter 32. Morning Star (Part 2)
Anime & Comics · amattsu
I'll be honest, I did not enjoy this chapter. I feel like mahito shouldn't have survived as long as he did against the MC.
ch 48 Chapter 28. The Power of the Spirit (Part 6)
Anime & Comics · amattsu
I feel like this dialogue is from OPM.
"𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦'𝘴 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘢 𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘭𝘦 𝘦𝘷𝘪𝘭 𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘢𝘯𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘥𝘦𝘧𝘦𝘢𝘵. 𝘐𝘧 𝘴𝘶𝘤𝘩 𝘢 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘦𝘹𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘥, 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘦 𝘸𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘴𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘨𝘰."
Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz
There are plenty of beings who are much stronger than true form darkseid like the presence, Lucifer Morningstar, elaine balloc, the spectre, superboy prime etc... As for the MC, i think the author stated that the MC is totally unkillable.
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Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
This is why I hate Xavier, anything that he can't control he considers to be a risk to humanity.
Not 7 billion lives on whim, no. It wasn't a risk he was willing to bet on. There were other cards to play.
Movies · Draul_TheOminous
To be honest this chapter sucked. Davian is looking for a challenge in the bleach universe after becoming one of the strongest beings in the DC universe.This is beyond stupid and just feels like the author just wanted to integrate the bleach universe in this story but didn't know how.
ch 183 180: Cunning Aizen.
Anime & Comics · Saintbarbido
Did you read the previous chapters? It's clearly mentioned there that the sorcerer supreme of this universe is in possession of the soul stone instead of the time stone.
"Except no one knows that I have the Time Stone. Hell, as far as the universe is concerned, the Time is either with Thanos or the Nova Empire. And besides, it is not as if earth is any safe considering that we currently hold two of the Infinity Stones."
Movies · QuackVader
If there is to be more romance in this fic plz let the love interest be Selene. It simply makes the most sense.
This made her smile, a satisfied and happy smile.
Movies · ToothlessS
Chapter 66: Anniversary Adversary
Anime & Comics · _Avatar0FFury_
He could have instead just pulled the homeless man out of the way.
He stretched out his hand to block the bus, thinking of protecting the homeless man.
Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69
Finally caught up to the end and I have to say that was a really fun read. This is one of the best Marvel fanfics I have read and I hope it gets updated soon because I really want more.
ch 65 Chapter 65: Dreams and Nightmares
Anime & Comics · _Avatar0FFury_
Plz don't kill off Laura, Gabbie or Raze, I love all the 3 characters.
It wouldn't come again for a long time. But as it was now, so alluring, he remained. Because in sleep, he saw Raze. He saw Gabbie and Laura unharmed. And Daken wasn't a traitor. Daken wasn't his newest object of obsession. Daken wasn't his living nightmare. Daken wasn't dead.
Anime & Comics · _Avatar0FFury_
I am usually against bringing back dead characters but i was really emotionally invested in those 3 characters, also their death was a bit too sudden.
Nobody usually stays dead in Marvel Universe..
Anime & Comics · Moziel
It seems as though the MC doesn't know what to do in his life since he already got almost everything he ever wanted so it would be cool if the system gave the MC an arch nemesis so that the MC may have some sort of challenge in his life. As for who the arch nemesis could be, I want them to be more than just powerful but also someone who is cunning and has access to a lot of resources like Vilgax from Ben 10.
Anything you might want to see, potential summons (next one is already set in stone, but the following isn't), which character do you feel needs more screen time. Let me know please!)
DC: Leave my Cat alone
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator