バッジ 2
Moments 8
After a few chapters, I saw that the thoughts of each character were on point and nicely spelled out, and that the story was well planned. There are a few flaws to work out, but the rest of the book is wonderfully written
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There's small grammatical and spelling overall,but the story is quite interesting so far,I hope the author can keep this up.
この本は削除されました。
Mr.Prince[img=love]
Wasn't he supposed to be an evil-looking bloodsucker? Instead, I was looking at the most handsome man I had ever laid my eyes on. He had exquisite features, an alluring personality and a heart-melting smile plastered on his face. With an aristocratic nose and a long pointed chin, he could be mistaken for a prince. His hair was long, straight and silverish cascading over his broad shoulders and flowing down to his waist. His slim hands were adorned with long and delicate fingers, one of them was resting on the chair while the other was under his face which was tilted sideways. Then there were those elegant pair of grey eyes, silent and calm as the sea on a normal day, yet fixated on me with a hint of insatiable hunger. His muscles were toned to perfection revealed by a purple deep neck which showed his bare chest, sculpted and chiselled to perfection. I couldn't determine his height as he was sitting but he appeared to be over 6 feet tall. I couldn't peel my eyes off him.
Elven Encounter With A Blood Seeker
Fantasy · Sunny_Shumail
The author is really good at using his words to describe what's happening and setting the scene.The story has great potential can't wait foe more.
Sacrosanct
Fantasy · Eldritch_Umbra_2710