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A good idea turned into into something average by the writer. The story could have been rather written with a mindless puppet itself as the MC who cannot have his own ideas or thoughts and just follows everything hes told to do or think like a dog following it's owners orders. I was excited at the prospect of the MC discovering stuff on his own, but all I see is him being taken advantage off and having no opinion of himself. The MC has no character so to speak. He is a number one waste.

Thanks for the reply author. I understand the points you are making about other players being better at the moment since the MC is still developing even with the system's help. My only issue was how the focus of other players mentioned here was his brother who at the present was as good as the MC even if he just started the sport and even got a better team and all. It would just be upsetting for the MC to lose to him especially with everything going in his brother's way. If the MC continues being undermined by his brother in accolades and victories, then it just seems forced to make such a character a brother figure in the story and then giving him all the advantage. I am saying this because the story at the moment seems very predictable to me on but still, hopefully I'm wrong. Anyways, thanks for the great work and keep it up!

Loving the novel. The author has done a great job, especially with the language and writing. There are no issues regarding grammatical errors which is such a good relief on this platform, so please keep it up. Storywise, the author has done a fantastic job and hopefully this continues (please do not make the MC lose, very competitive person here hahahah). Great Job and Keep It Up!!!!

Hello Author, first of all I am really really loving this novel so much that I have caught up using the privelage chapters. I have a few questions if you don't mind answering; 1. Will you complete this novel once and for all or put it on hiatus like the previous ones you have published? Personal preference is that I hope you complete it. 2. I understand that the goal is the MLB but I hope you will contine on to show him playing there and also competing for the world championship. I have seen that you mention the major anime and I too am a fan of it, so please include the MC competing for the biggest trophy. Please give any hints regarding this. 3. This is the most important for me. Readers who like to read sports stories are generally very competitive in nature, so please understand the disappointment shown if the MC loses the competitions or is not shown as the best player. I understand the need for character development and stuff but it is very disturbing to see others (his brother especially considering he is new to the game ) suceeding continuously while he fails at the final step. I am mainly concerned about this because the author's love for the anime Major, so I know you will understand based on Goro's life. Please do not make it too dramatic like it was in the anime. I know the author cannot give any direct answers but I will still request that you can reply to those three points as best as possible. Also keep up the great work and cannot wait for the new chapters. Loving the story, Thank You!!! P.S. Sorry for the lengthy message

A really shitty one piece fanfic. I have never seen a more stupid and brainless MC in any story so far. I feel like the author himself does not know what he is writing or planning. The story so far feels like has had no progress for 100+ chapters. This fanfic is just a waste of time. Absolutely rubbish.

Also I would like to add that even though it is hard to keep up with the changes to your own story as the original manga is still ongoing, the author cannot just straight up change established facts. If it has been 5-6 years since the MC's entry to the world, the current year has to be 1498-99 based on how you started the fanfic. The author cannot just suddenly change the timeline as he wishes to 1505, as if the previous 700 or so chapters had no meaning. It make no sense especially since it is clearly mentioned that it is still not time for Roger's surrender based on actual timeline. Please fix your story. I, as a reader feel that the closer I am to the updated chapters, the further the author is denying his own facts that he mentioned earlier in the story. Very Disappointing.

One of my favourite fanfics and I am really enjoying it. The only downside of this fanfic starts from around chapter 570 when the author starts using a really bad font for his manga part. It is really irritating to read those parts because of the font and only spoils the reader's mood. That is the only downside to this fanfic otherwise everything else is great.

A very good story that started out capturing the reader's interest and attention ended up totally destroying the mood of the reader. The story was going well until the last 100-150 chapters where it felt like the author forgot the premise of his own story. The title of the novel makes no sense by th end. I felt like the author/writer was happy with just making money by fooling the dedicated readers at the start and then did not even bother writing properly later on. He wantedly destroyed a good novel.

I really like the concept of this novel and was really into from the start. However, even though the story is good, I cannot help but get frustated because there are so many chapters that are a waste. There are so many moments that feel like the story is being dragged just to increase the number of chapters for every minor or small incidents. It is very irritating and spoils the reader's mood. Sometimes I feel the author is purposefully dragging the story to increase the word and chapter count. It is very frustrating for me as a reader to watch such a good concept and story being mishandled.

It has a lot of potential but the character of the mc is really too irritating. Whenever a problem occurs, he gives in and keeps finding ways to run away and not face it directly or even try using his brains. What's the point of having so many overpowered skills and items but still being scared all the time and trying to run away. The author cannot have the mindset of having a full clan development story being lowkey style. One or two people being lowkey kind of story is understandable but not a whole clan development one. Where is the respect for a clan leader if he keeps giving in and trying to run away whenever a problem occurs.

I really like this fanmade continuation of the original novel. I know that the writer has already stopped working on this, but as a reader and a genuine fan, I can only hope that if the writer sees this, you will contine to update this novel. It is a really selfish request but all I hope that, even as a hobby, you can finish this novel. Thank you!

Love this novel. Although it could do better with less arrogant young masters and the typical Chinese cultivation tropes. Otherwise, its a fun read.

The novel is really enjoyable. There are certain parts that I find are not explained properly or are skipped entirely so I hope it does not stay that way, but nothing major. The only problem I find is that, I have read up to chapter 140 but the power ranking system has still not been explained properly. There are mention of first, second and third class spellcasters as well as something called paragon, but there is no explanation of how these classes/level of power is comprised. What are the requirements or conditions to be considered such. I hope the author can give an explanation on this.

Also, I suggest adding a proper ranking for the beasts as well because it is confusing at times, for example, around chapter 178, when he says he is a rank 2 cultivator as a whole and goes all out to defeat three similar ranked opponents but can easily fight against a rank 3 beast. It becomes confusing at these moments for the reader.

I am liking this novel a lot. There are small things that are not written well or are unsatisfactory according to me, but its passable. The only issue or problem with this novel is the ranking system. There are three different rankings for the three forms of power. Then there is a fourth ranking which is based on the accumulation of the three previous rankings. The problem is that this fourth ranking is not specifically mentioned about how it is formed or what combination of the 3 rankings make each of the fourth combined one. Then there is the issue of the item rankings. Higher rank beasts are used to make lower rank weapons which somehow have their own rankings. i would like to suggest making a clear chapter in the start, before the novel begins, properly indicating all the rankings and a bit about what constitutes them. A separate chapter only for the separate three rankings and what combination of them leads to the fourth combined rank.

I would also like to add that it is really POINTLESS to have fight scenes regarding useless characters who will be forgotten or not even needed very soon. It is a waste of time and chapters. If this is how you wrote only 200 chapters in 8 months, then I would rather suggest now itself to the the future readers who will read this comment to not waste their time on this novel. Please don't take this the wrong way. I have nothing against your novel, in fact I love the concept and only want a good story to be written out of it. That is why I am suggesting develop and improve your novel so that the concept does not go to waste. Btw, again, the writing and english is really really frustrating.

I will be honest here. The novel will stop most of the readers at the start from continuing to read it, after a few chapters. The English, writing and grammar is really frustrating. I am trying to read the novel and hoping that the further I read, the better the writing will become, but its just unbearable. It is same mistake all authors make trying to please the readers by making excuses that it will get better later on. You have to understand that the start of the novel is the most important part of the reading experience, it contains the general idea of the type of the novel the reader is going to expect and important information that is to be known to understand the story. If the start is so frustrating and unbearable, you cannot expect the readers to continue reading your story. It has been 8 months and there is still no edits to the beginning, this shows why your novel is still not so popular and the support received is not that great. This is just my suggestion as a reader as it is the only reason I will mostly not continue reading this novel. I don't know if this helps you or it will be ignored, but thats all I can say. Also, the update stability, in my opinion is slow as compared to other popular and thriving novels on webnovel, so if you are looking to succeed as a writer and not a part-timer, I suggest you buck-up and pick up the pace.