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Urgh. I need to re-edit volume 1. The writing quality used to be awful. Sorry for the bad early language quality. But to be fair, English is my second language and this is my first attempt at writing a novel.
[old cover for those who want to see it]
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
It's completely intended that there are uncomplete feelings. The fic is far from over. And the interpretation is more or less completely correct too. Only, the 'husband' doesn't return. The 'husband' died and the 'woman' chooses to stay loyal to her 'husband' and to her duty as an aura guardian. <= That's also the moral of the story. No matter how hard you try, you can never replace the one who was first. Why the egg exists? Because I thought about it a lot and determined it's best that way. Too many +Points for the overall fic.
ch 28 Life goes on
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Don't worry. Early volume 1 is the lowest point of the MC in terms of unskilled-ness. Comparable to Izuku of MHA. Which is because the MC is young. And a main-theme of the fic is "being forced to grow up".
Wrong. I never forget a single plot-hook... Except for the ones I can't remember.
Zoey would totally agree. And we kinda are in a long distance relationship already. I definitely have to verify that with her once I have internet again.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Her Grandma gave MC the number while signing the book she wrote. Volume 4, chapter "Meeting Heroes"
With my freezing cold fingers, I enter a different number that I had memorized immediately after reading it.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Foreshadowing. You are free to look it up on google. But you don't need to.
"Why did he say Alamos Town like that?" Dawn grumbles out.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
My thinking for that was, that since trainers have the potential to become REALLY strong; negligent or murderous behavior needs to be stopped early.
The young trainer had his license revoked and was excommunicated from his social circle.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Actually not. It's a title I took from Google images of an USA authored book.
The book is called 'EXTREME WILDERNESS SURVIVAL Essential Knowledge To Survive Any Outdoor Situation Short-Term or Long-Term, With Or Without Gear And Alone Or With Others' - By Professor Sylvana Hedera.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Narrator:Not like that. Grow up.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
"Mission: Impossible" The movie. But MiSsANNE is almost pronounced like Mission.
MiSsANNE Impossible
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
(don't mention how much I'm reaching with that title 😭 )
MiSsANNE Impossible
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Kind of agree, kinda disagree too. I want to have some of that "cheerful anime journey" to be a big aspect of the fic. This is escapism after all. And escaping from our real hell to a fictional hell doesn't feel very escape-y to me xD Permanent injury and death still happens. Just not from everyday accidents. I feel like the fic would need to turn more into "Master of Tactics" if the characters needed to constantly worry about death. The way it is now, major consequences can only happen from major events.
Gloom is KO and the guy whose face I turned into meat-scraps... He's just KO too? ... Ah, right. I forgot. Humans became more durable and are stronger than animals now.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
A self-insert is when the character is the author. Nothing to do with 1st or 2nd person. This is a reader-insert because it's written in a way in which the reader is supposed to identify as the MC. I personally believe that 1st person is better for that effect than y/n or other styles. But none of this matters. It's a good fic. And it's long enough to get used to the writing style.
The synopsis is not part of the story. That 'you' is just to tell potential readers that the fic is a reader-insert. The narrator may use a stylistic 'you'. It could be replaced with the word 'one'. "Everywhere one looks, bla"
Not sure if I understand your complaint correctly. Was it confusion about 1st/2nd POV? Or is it about reader-inserts being bad? Because I personally disagree with that. Reader-inserts are the most fun to read.
It's using primarily "I"-POV (1st person). Never "You"-POV (2nd person). Sometimes "He"-POV (3rd person), for dramatic effects.
Or will she do him, hmmmm?
She's so damn cute, curled up like a fluffy, furry little ball. She is using her ears as a pillow. Her soft snores and peaceful face are so pleasant to my senses. She is perfect.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14