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Surprisingly very good story, one of the better Overlord fics on this site. Keep writing and dont abandone it, author.

Absolutely in love with your version of Lumine, the best one I have seen by far, an actual character instead of usual blank personality. Great work, keep it up. The only part I didnt like in the story was that Sumeru side-story.

Surprisingly entertaining to read, the only major issue I have with this is the grammar. There are a lot of stupid misspeling with he or she. Overall an okay novel.

Typical trashy wish fulfillment story, if you are fan of that you will enjoy. If you trying to find real gem in this god forsaken site, this is not the one. Incest was the final straw of what I could tolerate in this fic. I could understand Weiss feeling something for MC, but Winter and Willow being in love with him is just stupid and tasteless.