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Father is male so you should use "him".
"Yes, I found her."
The Farmer’s Eldest Daughter Has a Spatial Pocket
General · Three Dates
That's wrong. if you tilt your head back during nosebleed, you run the risk of the blood clotting in your air passages. this will cause Asphyxiation. you tilt your head forward to avoid this.
Yao Chunqin hurried over and pulled her up, only to find that the other's nose had hit the ground, and now a trickle of blood was winding down, which gave her a fright, "Oh my, you're bleeding. Hurry, tilt your head back... Where's your handkerchief?"
The Fierce Farm Girl Has A Secret Space
General · Purple Snow Condensed Smoke
That is why I put "?" at end just in case I was wrong. if I am sure I will end the sentence with "." thank you for the correction
The four of them chuckled and stepped away. That was when I realized that I was being carried in Liu Yu Zeng's arms. The men were walking towards the front gate, the rest of our men following behind us. "We had plans to hunt for supplies while you were out, but you woke up too soon," admitted Liu Wei as he adjusted the leather gloves on his hands. "However, that can change if you need it to."
Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm
Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 120 Chapter 120 Shotgun Wedding?
My 100th Rebirth a day before the Apocalypse
Fantasy · GoddessKM
thank God this is fiction. Tiger and wolf can't have babies. wolf and fox or dog. cat can with other felines not canines.
Like father, like son, this little one's dad was a wolf, so it was normal for it to howl like one.
The Fierce Farm Girl Has A Secret Space
General · Purple Snow Condensed Smoke
why do you keep calling biological mother, stepmother? this is wrong 😕
The stepmother had forgotten about the past, and all she could remember was probably what happened after she joined Qian's third wife. In her heart, Qian Manjiang was her dearest person, her children were her most loved ones, Qian Sangui's couple and Qian Xiaqian were the people she cared about the most; she could not bear to see any of them get hurt.
Transmigration: A Farm Girl's Brocade
History · Lonely Spring
I think you mean "three years oldER" three years old is toddler. three years older mean 3 years later in time.
Su Hua laughed. He held Sun Baoqian's hand and rubbed her fingers with his fingers. He said softly, "Qianqian, you're still too young. It's very difficult to have children. When you're three years old, it won't be too late for us to have a child."
Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
History · Skin White As Snow
sounds like grouper.
Su Xiaolu really did not know what kind of fish this was. It took many days to travel from Wuzhou, Qinghai, to the capital. It had to be preserved by ice, but this fish did not have any fishy smell.
Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
History · Skin White As Snow
isn't Yixiu the granddaughter? why is she calling her grandpa, husband? did I get the names wrong?
Qian Yixiu discussed with Qian Sangui, "Husband, we can no longer tolerate the Xu family; we must find a way to deal with them. Otherwise, they might bite us when we least expect it, and that would be terrifying."
Transmigration: A Farm Girl's Brocade
History · Lonely Spring
wounds NOT scars. she just created them mother should be wounds. scars are created after the scabs come off. scars last longer than wounds.
It had only been 30 minutes, and Ben En had scars everywhere.
Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
History · Skin White As Snow
Lui is male. he cannot be niece-in-law. males can only be nephews and nephew-in-law.
Madam Yin heard Liu Zijin's persuasion and had a better impression of this niece-in-law.
Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
History · Skin White As Snow
minimum is 2 catties, but they get paid more. to punish them it should be one coin for 2 catties = 1/2 coin per catty. that is better punishment
Su Sanlang's expression was calm as he said to Old Master Wang, "Grand Duke, I was willing to buy it from the village because I had feelings for them. However, they went back on their word and didn't care about our feelings. Now, they want to sell it to me again. I can actually refuse to buy it, but if they're willing to sell it, I'm willing to pay three copper coins for two catties. If they think the price is low, then forget it."
Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
History · Skin White As Snow
you cannot used Korean grammar format with English grammar. your current English grammar is similar to country bumpkin.
"Why does she have to give him a hard time now? She's no more the obedient lover girl she was before." Hwang Yu-jin thought angrily made a call talked to someone for 3 minutes and hung up the call.
REBORN TO REVENGE.
Urban · Rikky_Joy
if you are raised in English speaking country, your language arts grades must be bad. if you are from non-English speaking country, you need better English editor.
この段落は削除されました。
REBORN TO REVENGE.
Urban · Rikky_Joy
there are excess words that make the sentence sound off. your grammar is off.
この段落は削除されました。
REBORN TO REVENGE.
Urban · Rikky_Joy
why are you calling biological father, stepfather ? just because he act like one does not make him one.
Daohua heard their conversation, took another glance at those fawning over their stepfather, let down the carriage curtain, sat next to Yan Wenkai, and whispered, "Fourth Brother, who irritated you?"
The Humble Family's Daughter Has A Spatial Pocket!
General · Knocking Brush
you have such good storyline, but your grammar really ruins it. do better
Justin covered his face and peeped at his father through small gaps in his eyes.
Transmigrating from a zombie world to become the mecha kings wife
Sci-fi · 1cutecat
siblings should be children. from mother's view, they should be children or kids. from female lead who is the eldest sister, they are siblings. in your sentence structure, it should be changed to children or kids.
"But one thing, I've saved you once already, pulled you back from the grip of the Grim Reaper. So we're even when it comes to the debt of saving a life. As for the debt of upbringing, I will raise your younger siblings. So, whatever you want to do, I won't stop you. Please feel free." Yang Ruxin finished and took a deep breath, then looked after the youngsters, "Let's go, we're having dinner at Aunt Feng's tonight; I'll make dry pot chicken..."
The Fierce Farm Girl Has A Secret Space
General · Purple Snow Condensed Smoke