It amazes me that even though there are 1000 stories with the same plot, people keep copying the same plots with the same mistakes (DXD, MHA, ONE PIECE)
ok, you gave him 3 skills of a creation god. I hope you can balance this story well.
ch 0 -1 STATISTICS pt.2
Anime & Comics · Kaioshin
If you describe your character as handsome and charismatic, then you don't need powers related to sexuality. If you give it to them, it simply speaks to how desperate you are as an author.
ch 0 -2 SKILLS
There is so much garbage that I didn't need a system to explain it and what makes it very powerful is that it requires a charismatic character so that the story doesn't get boring.
ch 0 -4 STATISTICS
Is the system a joke? Just say you have the power and what else do you need? I seriously hope you don't come up with nonsense that you need to train.
ch 0 -6 Template / System? / Gacha?
Translation If you realize that these powers are explained as simple fire manipulation, there isn't much difference other than temperatures and techniques.
ch 0 -7 AUX
I read up to chapter 30 of Hay, I couldn't stand the story anymore, if you're going to change the personality then do a rewrite.
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
As the author said, it is his first story and it has the problems of a beginner, it is very flat and very powerful, the mc There's no problem with a character being very powerful but it has to be balanced with a flashy personality and the MC doesn't have that.
The protagonist is useless, he just follows the canon like a child, the world of One Piecw is supposed to be one of adventure and freedom, the protagonist is the furthest thing from that.
Anime & Comics · PapaSmurf0700
Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.
Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
Well the romance begins after 400 chapters (no joke) after 150 chapters the protagonist will become more gloomy, the author incorporates several concepts that do not add up
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
These are my personal tastes, don't worry, your story has a good basis, keep it up.
Anime & Comics · Tr0llFac3
The general idea is good but the entire development is horrible, when you finish it you have to do a restructuring. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Anime & Comics · nexusstar21
I hate the story that is so far from the original. but there is no system, there is no slave to the system, finally someone uses the powerful races of one piece and a single fruit that's 5 stars
This is a translation, it doesn't matter if I mention all the problems and solutions, the story will be left with all the garbage it already has.
Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
It's for the review, no one is interested in reading about an extra character
So look for another story to translate, the Chinese make hundreds of fanfics and from time to time they release a new one among so much garbage.
There are many topics that the anime does not touch on because it is shonen, also the interactions of the protagonist with the main cast and the change of characters from class to b, also helping the villains since the only thing that moves them are their traumas. , a little therapy and that's it, they are healthy
Anime & Comics · Digital_Ink
Ok, calling it plagiarism was a lot, but the plot of your talentless son has already been used several times and is no different from other stories.
Anime & Comics · Ahilash_Danie
I don't know if you are copying this story from others with the same plot, but at least have the disappointment of not copying the same mistakes.
I will never understand the pleasure of being killed by a god. I know we are not the most sociable, but we do have a little self-love. The protagonist is pitiful, he is a demigod but he does nothing relevant, a waste of time.
Anime & Comics · Luixto_Miroku
ポルノコンテンツ 憎悪またはいじめ 個人情報の公開 暴力 スパム その他
ok, you gave him 3 skills of a creation god. I hope you can balance this story well.
ch 0 -1 STATISTICS pt.2
Riser Phenex? DXD SI. Multicross?
Anime & Comics · Kaioshin