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no no! thanis u. lol

its like im reading a report on a novel instead of a novel. no dialogue just he did this he did that

richard sorge? the journalist? yeah i love old spy memoribillia i love how its vastly different from the james bond movies

just ignore the ones being insulting. your never going to please everyone but alot of us just point out things we see as plot holes or weird to make story better or get reasoning behind it. ive seen alot of web novels stories change when they get a light novel and then change again as a manga so thats why i always comment my frustrations with a novel. oh btw dont take any of my complaints as me being mean i know text doesnt convey the tone in which it is said. i enjoy story and thanks for clarifying your point

me oh i guess i can use a fre pass to read. immediatly regrets it as they plot to punish theo for their whole sisterhood group. i mean do u have friends? seriously pay some people to let u hang out with them where u can research dialogue

i get ur point but as a reader this is why i think its a worry about being in known in the next country over. its because of how u mentioned that one lady mercenary knowing about him and expressing wanting to dissect him. it led us readers to think that near by countries probably know about big things like that through searching their internet or spys. i mean i would think that in a country with mercenaries frqnt would have spys embedded in that country. i mean frant knew about the thiad cryst al weapons. also i know chameleon veil doesnt work that way i was expressing a desire that u had given him a power like that on the way over. i mean there was a golden oppurtunity to give him a few new powers on the way over. also another thought is i feel as if on his way across the forest you mentioned he fought alot but u didnt give him powers from those other monsters that u didnt mention by name you just said he fought alot. im not talking about monsters he killed around others but he trekked across forest if u had rattled offf a list of random powers none of us would of batted an eye

i think its weird that all this time mako has been the unofficial leader and the others not automatically voicing that especially bill

then why was he worried to use the flyssa when he was fighting soldiers? all im just sayingis that if all of a sudden an erik with a flyssa starts making a name for himself as a mercenary wouldnt it maybe draw attention to him that would warrent a a closer look? its not like he changed his appearance at all. i mean i really thought he was going to get a chameleon power and use it to change his hair color. you could explain the power not being noticable as another power by saying that of course a monster with chameleon powers wouldnt be noticeable because it defeats purpose of being a chameleon

it was to the death how dare he try to save some people. would he have saved lux? no so get the f out of here with that shit

i love this book. its fast become my favorite novel. i wish more chapters were released every day.