It's a great book. But the huge wall of text... It makes my head spin
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Urban · chavontheauthor
Maybe you could reduce the wall of text author? Just a suggestion
I had known Faith for years, but only after working here we became best friends. After going from foster home to foster home I ended up back at the group home I had been ever since I was a baby. Unfortunately, I had not known my parents or had any opportunities in life, so during my teens I made a promise with myself to succeed. My goal was to finish high school, college and get a good job as a choreographer but it obviously didn't really work out like that. Not even I could have predicted I would've been working at a strip club at the young age of twenty-one.
Urban · chavontheauthor
Great book
I could've taken a job at the convenience store or as a choreographer which was actually supposed to be my goal in the first place. I didn't mind stripping, or the outfits— I never did. Everyone had a different way of paying their bills and this was one of them, so no, I wasn't embarrassed and it was an easy way to make money, but still, it wasn't what I had planned.
Urban · chavontheauthor
So far so good! I like it
ch 0 1 BIRTHDAY OR DEATHDAY (1)
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
Daddy's girl
"My baby, I was worried to death." She mumbled, tenderly stroking Eleanor's hair.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
😂
Eleanor giggled apprehensively as she realized what was happening. She had disturbed Greta, her mistress, hours earlier, before dusk, for sugary pastries, citing her birthday as an easy ticket. And because she wasn't permitted to consume sweet foods as they always had strange effects on her body she hid in the bathing room, gorged herself on food to her heart's delight, and passed out in the tub.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
Mistress?
"Oh my!" Upon entering the room, her mistress, who appeared to be in her late forties, cried out. She stared at Eleanor with dread from head to toe and grimaced when she noticed water flowing out of her clothes like a torrent.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
Oh! She didn't even leave the palace😂
The maids all froze, turning to face her stiffly and keeping their expressions of shock. "Your Majesty!" they called in unison.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
She sounds beautiful.
While the entire castle was being searched by maids and soldiers who were all in a panic, a certain golden-haired princess was in her bathing room dozing in a bubble-filled tub. Her face was covered with cream from a pastry, her lips sporadically curled into a trembling smile, and with a long sleepy yawn, her deep ocean blue eyes fluttered open.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
Why is she kept a secret?
Enebelle was a thriving home for phoenixes, however, no one but the Dankworth royal family was aware that the king and queen had given birth. Rumors spread throughout the entire kingdom that the king and queen lacked an heir to carry on the family's legacy, but unbeknownst to the populace, the Dankworths had imprisoned her ever since she was born, forbidding her to interact with anyone outside of her immediate family.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
What is coiffe?
"Is there any trace of Eleanor, Arlette?" Arlette turned to look in the direction where the voice came from to see her husband enter. He appeared to be as anxious as she was, and when she shook her head negatively, he sighed and buried his fingers into his nicely coiffed white blonde hair.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
Is this woman our fl?
The woman tightened her teeth, anger and frustration flashing in her blue eyes. "My head aches all because of this child." As a maid walked up to her, she moaned, rubbing her forehead.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
I hope this will be good
"Where is she?" The brightly lit bedroom was full of maids who were scurrying from one area to another, grumbling and murmuring in fear, when a regal woman who appeared to be in her early thirties screamed out and entered.
Fantasy · Mystic_Fantasy73
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 You Are Fired
A Vampire’s Caregiver
Fantasy · AngelLily