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Props to you! Keep putting in the hard work. My only suggestion is to read some well-written books and research how to improve writing characters and dialogues. You'll definitely get better over time.

I'm not sure if the author will keep my review, but here it is: This story felt flat and uninspiring to me. The characters and writing seemed hollow and lacked depth. I've never seen 'The 100', so I don't know the characters, but what I read didn't make me want to keep going. I think the author has potential to improve.

I haven't watched Game of Thrones, so I only know about it from other fanfics. This one is well-written and interesting. There are a few things I'm not clear on, and some parts I don't agree with, but I'm still intrigued and want to read more. Overall, it's pretty good.

Even though the fic has some questionable scenes, it starts off pretty well. The system aspect is a bit confusing and not very straightforward. I'm also unsure if I'll like the harem style the author is aiming for with Rudeus. But overall, it's an above-average read.

The idea behind it is interesting, but the way it's done isn't great. It's just okay, not amazing. Maybe give it a shot if you're out of other things to read.

I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.

This DBZ fanfic is pretty solid. It's got a cool premise that I haven't seen much of before, which kept me hooked. Shoutout to the author for their work, and good luck to them! I'm gonna let some more chapters pile up before I jump back in.

This fanfic blew me away! It's hands down one of the best I've ever read on this site. Young Kenshin's interactions had me cracking up non-stop during the first two arcs. All in all, it's just an amazing story. Mad props to the author - you killed it! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for arc three. Bring it on!

So, I went into this Tonikaku Kawaii fanfic totally blind, with no clue about the anime. Zero expectations. I've only read the first 20 chapters, but here's the deal: the premise felt pretty cliche, and honestly, it was a bit of a letdown. Kinda reminds me of a typical Chinese fanfic. The interactions between the main guy and girl made me cringe a bit - feels like it was written by a teenage girl, lol. The chat group system was a nice touch, but there hasn't been much focus on that in these early chapters. Plus, the main character is already super OP from the get-go, so I'm not sure where the story's headed. Look, it's not really my thing, but hey, props to the author for putting their first fanfic out there on this platform. Best of luck to 'em!

This fanfic is totally awesome! It's such a refreshing read compared to a lot of the other stories on this site. The author has done a great job mixing characters from different universes together. I'm really excited to see where this story goes. Author, you're doing a fantastic job - keep it up!

I honestly feel like I might not be getting the full genius of this story. It began on a high note but quickly became a bit messy, unpolished, and repetitive, just like another review mentioned. Even after 20 chapters, I'm struggling to catch on to the main hook or setup of the plot; it seems a bit scattered to me.