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Ryan, a 15-year-old orphan and die-hard Harry Potter fan, dies and wakes up in the wizarding world, now inhabiting the body of a boy with his same name and age… but this time, he's an Ollivander.
Upon activating a magical creation system, he sets out not only to grow stronger, but to turn the family wand business into a magical empire far beyond anything the wizarding world has seen.
Armed with future knowledge and boundless ambition, he’s determined to revolutionize the magical economy, and survive.
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The story takes place during the Marauders era, with characters like Snape, Lily, James, and Sirius all around the protagonist’s age.
The timeline is changed from canon so it could be considered an AU.
His two main love interests: Lily Evans and Andromeda Black.
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its well written. my encouragement to new author. give it a try. its about a guy who has system to learn knowledge from with money and then uses that to build magical tools to sell. till now its a great start, lots of focus on merchant business tho, hopefully in future he will find his own sales guy and fully focus on development
It’s an Amazing fanfic, I especially like his Mother Iris she seems to be a great Mother and remarkable Witch. I hope he gets together with andromeda and please no harem. At the moment there aren’t many chapters but those 12 chapters I read are truly great, the family felt truly close and connected. There wasn’t a moment that felt awkward. Andromeda is at the moment the love interest is rarely seen most go with bellatrix or narcissa. Personally I like andromeda the most out of the black sisters. The system seems interesting but at the moment we don’t know much about it (this isn’t a critique, it is amazing that we don’t know much about it and that there seems future updates or unlockable features it makes it more enjoyable to read) Please upload more in the future and don’t get discouraged or lose your confidence, it’s truly a remarkable fanfic of the Harry Potter universe and I recommend Harry Potter fans to read it
Honestly they lost the plot chapter 42 only 2 inventions now its sex, study and rizz like i came for the inventions i gave it a low score cuz it is so mid i ued to wait for updates like i mean check every 2 minites but now i only read if i got no other books to read
A história tem originalidade e sim já li uma história parecida com essa na questão de ter o mesmo tema no caso o protagonista principal você é da mesma família tempo essencial e não vejo a hora de ir no futuro essa história ter 200 capítulos ou sem dependendo de como o autor ou autora quer terminar tudo que eu posso dizer é a história que é potencial e é muito boa
I love what you have been doing man. Every time I open up WebNovel, I pray each time that you had uploaded even a single chapter; and each time you hadn't, I feel actually sad, anyways love the story bro
wow, this book blew mind by how great it was. It was like when you keep reading and reach the last chapter and have to go check the update schedule, that good. Author pls do not stop this is shaping up to be one of the best harry potter fanfics I've ever read good job
very nice but different from normal hp fic loved it hoping to get more and more chapters up ahead but yeah good development to make him a pure blood other than the same sacred 28 and direction of magic is absolutely brilliant explore more on enchantments (hoping) ......
At the beginning, this writing was good and it was definitely interesting. Mc when at home was trying different type of magic. However, the progression after getting into hogwarts hasn't really worked. Most part of the story was sadly about mc and him being glazed by literally everyone in Most chapters ,which would've been fine if it was only a few chapters and then you focused on plot progression. But it didn't happen. Another thing didn't help was the update rate was just too slow. If it was slow burn story , it would've been understandable but this wasn't the case. Another major issue is that you don't need to over describe every situation , every movement, every instance. At certain times, that becomes so exhausting. Overall, this story definitely has potential with the unique focus on Alchemy but will have to see further
i enjoy the inventing and the creation side of magic a lot. but i kinda hate how the students are always talking/thinking about MCs pre-isekai personality and actions. they keep bringing up how he was lazy, late, and lackadaisical in his studies; in gryffindor??!! the emphasis would be expected if the MCs from ravenclaw, but why are they so surprised about a gryffindor not taking school seriously?? and the recurring mention of the lost 35 points just makes me make this face 😑. other than that, i quite like the story. it's nice to see an MC that focuses on creating magic and whimsy instead of the usual combat and destruction.
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Really good fic. Impressive writing quality, really good story and the characters and the mc are really well written and with depth. And the overall story is unique with good humor and good development. Honestly if the author keeps updating and with this level of quality this might become one of the best fics of this site.
Really good story! A really fresh OC who is not focused on what the other characters are doing or if the story is progressing according to the original plot.
its refreshing to have an ff in marauders time line and the mc is an ollivander wich i think its a first for me, he is not one dimensional im enjoying the interaction so far keep up author
this fanfic cool so far. I love enchantment. people always act like total sheep in hp universes, act like weasley twins (overliking or importance in life pranks) or severus snape-voldy (worship slytherin values) or babysit trio adventurer (no change of story and creepy following 11 year old children to adventure final result already known which totally useless). with insert-reborn... approach must be like this,-realistic- like in this fanfic. People love magic and second chances, get/create magical toy-tool, get money, get women, change stupid stuff you hate. whether children dying or discrimination blood status or wizarding world slow stats, waste (arthur weasley cant even pronounce electricity can upgrade car to magical car.) of civilization... otherwise not really logical what so ever. even you didnt write logical at least write parody. nobody want to read story of babysitter.
An excellent novel. An excellent novel. Hoping for more updates. I have read many Harry Potter novels, but this is one of the best. So, please continue ...
The story is very interesting, and so far the protagonist's progression is quite satisfying, especially with the focus on the commercial aspect of his interactions, which is quite original. I also found the supporting characters well-written, and their interactions with friends or potential romantic interests feel very natural and enjoyable to read. I’ll be keeping an eye on it.
I love the MC. Well developed with interesting interactions with other characters. I look forward to more
bro good start thanks for story. is it mtl translation or original if myl pls share name