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If you like the witcher + avatar + system with levels and exp .
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The AI is strong with this one. If you can get past that the story can serve as decent filler if you don’t have anything else to read at the moment. The concept is interesting, I just wish that it was executed better. Not terrible, but not great either.
it has potential started nicely can't wait to see where the author takes this
Although I've given this book an overall rating of 3.8/5, it is genuinely an enjoyable read. I love the concept of having Airbender powers in the world of Witcher, and just love that the romantic subplot isn't overtaking the story completely.
Pretty good story so far, can't wait to read more, going to be on the lookout for the next chapter notification 😶
Interesting story and premise but writing feels very mechanically. The author only uses short sentences like spys when they're infiltrating something and you hear their monologue. like the protagonist is a robot in disguise. And it's the most typical I'm the biggest good person in the world. I don't want edgy but it also doesn't feel like hardship for me since it's obs he's gonna save everyone like an anime prof. World building and power system is nice enough and he's not opop. All in all its good enough if you're a witcher fan and you don't care much about clean writing(maybe it's just bad Ai translations) else scim or skip this
Honestly I really like the concept and the system (though the author needs to work on keeping up with the experience values instead of just saying +50 airbending at the end of the chapter without actually telling us the required experience to get the next level). I’m also not a big fan of how romance heavy this is, especially given that it’s underaged characters.
this story should not refer to anything that the mc is doing as bending, its not, he dosent bend the elements, he uses mp to do skills that ammount to hold out hand pew pew air. The feeling of either a decent translation of an inherently awful work, or just straight up ai is pervasive. tldr: a constant feeling of looking past flaws thinking it may get good, but it doesnt. Keep Avatar's name away from your work.
This is 100% Ai like others said good for a skim not a good read though. The lore is all wrong . The system stats are nonsense they seemingly mean nothing besides how much mp he has bad lol. Having typed all that I will say it's is a good skim read. By that I mean literally skim to the italics an system prompts an skip the rest.
Honestly the concept is pretty interesting but the writing itself is horrible. Every paragraph there is this “internal analysis” that just completely ruins the story intact I’m 90% this is written by AI as the story reads very robotically.
this is just to get the rating for the story next to title ,I hope everyone likes it.,there are a lot of chapters coming as long as there are readers so I hope everyone enjoy it.
story is good quite ,Im at chapter 28 and its very good [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Really good fanfic, would be better if more chapters are released. Also, at times, it feels like AI is driving the story. But I love the concept of an Avatar in the Witcher universe.
Solid so far. Only criticism I can leave is the overexplanation that takes up a lot of the words.
Honestly? My feelings on this fanfiction are in conflict. The good thing— it’s exactly as you’d expect of a translation, with terrible brain problems and bad decision making. The bad— the system. Instead of giving the mc the ability and have him figure it out to train into a respectable bender, he’s givens skills. Skills that aren’t as useful as a blow dryer. Seriously, why bother naming it the bender system if you’re basically an elemental ‘basic magic’ skill system?