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Ryo, a poor orphan in Konoha and a distant descendant of the Senju, is mocked for his red hair and lives at the bottom of the academy. One day, he awakens his cheat.
His first inheritance: the iron-blooded physique and combat legacy of Red-Haired Shanks from the world of One Piece.
From that moment, Ryo’s quiet days of napping in class hide a growing strength that no one can ignore. Between surviving, ruling the academy with his fists, and crossing paths with Uzumaki Kushina, his story in Konoha is about to begin.
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4.2
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- 업데이트 안정성
- 스토리 전개
- 캐릭터 디자인
- 세계관
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It's a good story but it can barely qualify as a Naruto fic from what I've read so far. I'm on chapter 22 and half the story is basically focused on mc looking for food, cooking food, and people being impressed by his food. This isn't even a Naruto story at this point, it's a cooking story with Naruto characters shoved in
J'aime pas la relation du protagoniste avec kushina c'est pas logique en mission et sûr le champ de bataille il va tuer des petites filles alors le truc je ne peux pas supporter les petits larmes d'une fillette ça colle pas est qui partage et en plus elle vole Et le protagoniste ne la pas défoncer ? Je l'aurais envoyé à l'hôpital ça m'a énervé et le chakra aurait dû grandir naturellement il aurait dû utiliser la technique de clonage pour étudier et s'entraîner et le système pas fou ça va être un modèle puis c'est tout après l'histoire va devenir encore plus merdique après c'est de mon point de vue chacun c'est goût et couleur mais ça reste merdique je m'attendais à rien et je comme même déçu
Well the protagonist personality is very stupid the way he is shown putting his own needs after kushina with her horrible behavior and unreasonable behavior with a personality that the MC has I don’t think it is logical that he can awaken Conqueror’s Haki because with his additude with kushina he has lost his spirit and will to never submit to no one his actions with kushina and still tolerating her unreasonable actions and behavior to awaken and use Conqueror’s Haki and make it stronger you should be Strong-Willed Individuals Who Refuse to Bow to other who try to control you his additude and actions with women convey that he has will to stand above others They don’t just follow—they inspire, command, or dominate. He does none of theses very well he lets kushina’s unreasonable action and accommodates them when she is in the wrong and when he goes out of his way to help her her attitude doesn’t improve she is still treating he with little respect. His personality at the beginning was fine but it got worse because he accommodated kushina unreasonable actions which any normal person wouldn’t tolerate such treatment it is especially bad that he is a reincarnated person. He should have normal morals and having a a good understanding or right and wrong
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The novel is developing spectacularly. I would like MC to be friendlier with Kushina, but it's understandable that he spent so much time alone that he's just now opening up to her. I like that he has Shanks's power but that he doesn't forget to use his chakra. I like that he's very ruthless with his enemies. I hope there are more updates.
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Thanks for the new release. is this a translation? if so could you give me the raw name
It's a great story If it's aa translation so please tell raw name....... otherwise stry is all well and good
I don't like it very much or hate this fanfic I think this rating is just what this deserve
Overall, a decent Naruto fic with no toxic chinese elements so far. The translator is doing a good job!
La historia tiene potencial, ya se que debería escribir esto en inglés pero me da tanta pereza el hacerlo en estos momentos, además que debo escribir un párrafo de por lo menos 140 caracteres o palabras en general se siente muy de relleno lo que escribo pero aquí estamos xD.
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I like it it’s interesting plus I hope it’s not a harem bro should also dress up like shanks when he’s older
Its okay but its like reading a poem with words that don't mean anything, its a harem with the same harem starter pack, the character shanks for the story was good but its just doesn't make me interested when there is no haki, the romance it feels forced like your trying to make a relationship like with Mikoto, mc is a wimp the beginning of the story shows this by his relationship with Tsunade, for some reason the author like to shit on Minato idk he wasn't that obsessed with everything but this story makes him that way. I think that's everything i cant really think of anything else maybe a little to much romance like its okay but there is to much and there literally a whole chapter of people reacting to sword slash.
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for the most part people calling this a translation are right. their arent any obvious signs such as chinese names which you normally see then when you look into authors past books you can see most of them are translation but i actually read his translation work before its pretty good you cant even notice it unless you look for it.
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The story is quite good to read refreshing from others and interesting also
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New Naruto fic after Reborn as Danzo's grandson. We are back to default Danzo, but I do hope you'll enjoy this too. Don't forget to sacrifice your power stones here and drop some reviews.